I, the Unbroken One [ITFO2] [Chapter Two Released!] [November 21st, 2025]

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And besides, it’s not Marshal/Darin. Which is the most cursed ITO ship

@Adam_Cay
Of course I did.

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Just come form the subreddit?

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Now, now. At least Marshal/Darin shippers have decency to keep that to themselves.

(okay, i have the decency to keep that to myself. Mostly)

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Im glad its mostly to themselves.

Rade/Rada isnt going anywhere anytime soon. Ever.

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Will there be another female ro for male mc other than lada ?

Nope

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Will there be new hags introduced in the future updates?

Is “hags” a typo?

@jjc73
One hag is enough, please and thank you.

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I thought they were on about Mira.

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Nevermind, there are no sane witches approaching Marshal’s roaming army they are not that stupid to do that to heal their fingers or something like that

Mira is not a hag but a milf (Mother I’d like to free-mortality).

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Bros art gives me a reason to live I require more rade and Ulysses fr :sob:

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Hey guys! Debating with myself if I should play this WIP or wait for the full book to be out. Can anyone tell me how much Vedran content we have at this point on the loyal route (if he’s alive and as well as can be, of course)? It may be my deciding factor with him being one of my favorite IF characters ever made and all of that. Thanks!

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I will say give the WIP a chance and the Vedran content is making me cheer for him.

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The wip itself is early yet but ive been happy with what content ive seen thus far.

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I concur.

Its good to read. Its how I knew Bacon can do wlw via W-4. Knowing also during that writing, mentions of putting in an exclusive girl in Book 2.

Id say try it. I want more.

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Thanks for the opinions!

When it comes to romance, I’m covered already with Obren, but since Vedran is my favorite character by far, I’m currently more concerned about his situation (especially considering even the best book 1 ending in regards to him was still bittersweet for obvious reasons), so it’s good to know he has some content already. I may just go ahead and check it out soon!

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Counting what I’ve written, it’s technically half the length of ITFO already. Or just about. But the issue is the three main paths split the writing pretty badly, so it’s only TWO chapters in, despite multiple months of writing effort. The new chapter is about 75% done, though. There’s some good Vedran content already, including a major emotional scene with him, and I just wrote a few in the unreleased Chapter Three.

Edit: *half the length of Whiskey-Four

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Damn, it’s crazy to think it’s so long already, even if of course variations play a part in that.

But yeah, knowing all of that, I definitely won’t be able to resist playing the WIP! Though I may just as well replay through the first game one more time before.

Thanks again!

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The first critical route of Chapter Three is nearing completion! I have… a lot of placeholders to fill in (mostly Obren romance scenes and battle options), though. I think, since it takes so frigging long to write the three routes, I’ll release the loyalist route early and separate for feedback. Appreciate everyone’s patience! I have some big plans for reworking/fixing the first two chapters as well, but this comes first.

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