I was wondering if it would be possible to appear holding, or just hold the lover’s body when the police look for you. Having the only options be negative or curious seemed weird.
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- My OC’s proper grave, planted after the events of the game in memoriam of the man who lost both his life and love in the shadows of the mysterious and now legendary Edgeworth Manor.
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So, I was finally able to finish the game. Looks like I have to choose between Lily and Michael. Can’t I save both? Great game by the way.
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I think there’s some bizarre variable error there, the game suddenly uses the MC’s name as some other character’s name (spouse perhaps? Since Violet talked to them as her sibling… whose gender also swapped to match the MC’s)
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@Nerull
Coding error in chapter 5.
First name of loved one stops to look back at you;
First name of loved one curls their lips.
First name of loved one doesn’t answer;
First name of loved one’s gaze then searches you
“Father built that,” First name of loved one says,
First name of loved one’s eyes close
“So yeah,” First name of loved one says.
First name of loved one nods
First name of loved one revisits the entrance hall with a gaze replete with anxiety;
Violet now places the pistol on First name of loved one’s chin
First name of loved one doesn’t answer.
Only First name of loved one face you with a gaze
Then she points at First name of loved one
The Brooks face First name of loved one
Violet then grasps the ceremonial dagger, and directs a hateful gaze at First name of loved one.
Violet Edgeworth makes First name of loved one walks further at gunpoint
the Brooks and First name of loved one traverse the dining room to reach the fireplace.
First name of loved one regards the key and shakes their head when she realizes what it is, their eyes growing larger.
She turns to First name of loved one.
You killed them, didn’t you?" First name of loved one asks.
Violet faces First name of loved one again with an unreadable expression.
You fucking monster!" First name of loved one cries
the tears keep rolling on First name of loved one’s face.
It’s a spell, First name of loved one.
You traverse the chamber and keep looking straight at First name of loved one,
You cannot feel First name of loved one’s warmth
In First name of loved one’s eyes, the answer comes quite simple.
You let go of First name of loved one as
Violet then stares at First name of loved one.
First name of loved one doesn’t answer;
she pulls her pistol again and aims it at First name of loved one’s head.
Violet nods; First name of loved one’s eyes widen.
Violet frowns and turns to First name of loved one.
The officers stand around First name of loved one’s body, too
It is impossible, even, that First name of loved one comes back as a ghost,
My loved one was Lily Edgeworth, but the code displaying her name isn’t working, and only displays her name as First Name.
She sighs, their pale face only barely illuminated by the flashlight she’s carrying.
Her
“I mean, the manor is not that big, so I doubt there are too many other… surprises.”
she pauses.
Capitalise the bolded word.
As she again takes the lead and illuminates the narrow stone staircase with the flashlight, you can only peek above their shoulders
Her
“Oliver?” your love one
Loved
“So,” she says, turning their attention entirely to you.
her
she then faces the many graves around.
Capitalise the bolded word.
Lily Edgeworth rolls their eyes at their own comments
Her
Some families have skeletons in the closed;
Closet
she looks at you again.
Capitalise the bolded word.
she adds: “And that everything that dies can also live again.”
Capitalise the bolded word.
Lily rushes to the kitchen and fetches a drink for you and a glass of wine for herself.
Water
!Lily Edgeworth takes another alcoholic sip
Remove the exclamation mark.
she laughs at the ridiculous thought.
Capitalise the bolded word.
You notice goosebumps on $their skin.
Remove the dollar sign.
In the scene with Violet and the ghouls confronting the Edgeworths, all of the choices don’t disappear when selected.
The evil look at you as if you were more dangerous that Violet Edgeworth herself—which might well be the case.
They even
But…" Oliver starts saying, looking at you with the corner of their eyes
The bolded text should be: Lily starts saying
No," Oliver says. “You’re not—”
“Of course I am, little brother,” says Violet.
The bolded text should be: Lily says
Coding error.
like the Brooks have many times realized in the night since the discovery of your true,
McKinnon sighs, then his eyes set on the true
The bolded words should be: your bones
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Made me cry, love it and hope there is more deep to the end. 
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Ch4, double paragraph with Ollie talking about dreams.
I was trying not to read much more before the official publication, but couldn’t help myself and reread the entire thing ^-^’ I shoulda gone to bed an hour ago, so I won’t write much, but I absolutely love all the new changes and all the little details that help flesh everything out.
I do agree with other comments that chapter 5 needs more work (though I entirely understand it’s a WIP and also a first draft), but I do hope you include an ending where we can continue to “haunt” the brooks in a friendly manner. It’s been a while so I may be misremembering, but I think I recall this being discussed as one of the endings planned (I think?) If not, I would adore it if it were added. I can understand how this
would be a really cutesy ending for a ghost story however… so maybe it should only really be possible for ghosts that truly strived to help the family, and to care for them? Especially if you choose to save the Brooks over your love, especially if you’re a sap like me and choose the love letter every time you play the game lol
Alright, that’s all I have time for now sadly. Maybe if I get more time later I’ll come back to add more, but this is what I felt like sharing the most. I’m a big ole softy and want the happy ending my ghosty butt worked so hard for XD (hell, make it a challenge to get that ending if you want, it’ll probably make it more sweet for the effort.)
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Maybe I just missed a clue somewhere, but I didn’t even realize the first flashback (at least, I think it was the first…) wasn’t in real time until after it ended. I thought I was talking to a ghost William as a ghost. Didn’t realize I was reliving my memories of him while we were alive.
EDIT: Ok, on my second playthrough I realize what text I missed before.
After several playthroughs, I’ve noticed that when the Brooks gather to discuss the weird things happening, they talk to each other about what you are able to do, and not what you have done. They’re somehow aware of which abilities you’ve chosen, but not aware of which actions you have and haven’t taken. For example, on my most recent playthrough, they mentioned seeing me appear in various places – I had taken Apparition, but actually had never used it except at the entrance during the Halloween party. They all mentioned feeling like they had been possessed – I only possessed one of them and only once.
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Even if you do absolutely nothing and just observe, they will still discuss you like you did something.
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Eh, well, you have to do something, at least the first time. There’s no option to progress past waking up in the attic without using a power at least once. But yeah, definitely weird that you can do almost nothing and they still think you did all these things you didn’t do…
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Maybe they accept the supernatural so easily because they have psychic powers?
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I mean, usually it’s claimed you can feel the presence. Eventually they’d catch on.
That was a hell of a WIP! I really enjoyed this!
Indeed, I will give you that. However, it’s one thing to feel something or someone’s presence, but it’s quite another thing to accuse them of something they didn’t do. In the entire game, I was only possessing Oliver once in the attic at the start.
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I wish there was a way for us to be brought back to life
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I’m ok staying dead if it gets me that threesome 
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How do you romance?
You don’t. It’s not a romance game.
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