From Ashes We Rise [FAWR / WIP] Upd. 30. Oct

Yes, and? :smirk:

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Nothing. ^^
Nothing at all, just my mind producing ideas over ideas that I can’t write down because I don’t have 6 arms and multiple keyboards to write on XD
Ah well, I am just the common 2-armed human with too much time and too many ideas… yay for being common.

Jokes aside, there is nothing I could add to the ‘Yes,and?’ at the moment, which is why I am writing nonesense…

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Sometimes we all need a bit of nonsense. :blush:


Sometimes I give too much of it. :flushed:

But I mostly wanted to reply to your question about Wraith. Unfortunately I am usually unable to answer things straight up. :sweat_smile:

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Ah, it happens to all of us ^^

Anyway. Yeah, there is not yet that much that we know about Wraith, but some, as @Nathan_Faxon stated above in his own words, seem to have already an opinion about her. Of course you don’t need to answer straight away on how you think about her just yet, but you can always think about it and give an answer later when we know more about her ^^

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Well, I did sort of answer already, but to refer to your post…

Creepy more than normal. Don’t like her. Why? Because she’s more creepy than normal. :neutral_face: Also comes across not quite moral or overly sane. And those powers, ew. :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

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I don’t hate wraith, I sympathise with her because she must be trying to bring people back to life for a reason, maybe she lost someone?

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Kidnapping sounds like fun :grinning:

-I wouldn’t kidnap Vine because Phoenix has a hidden crush on her. (Phoenix is basically gay and still in the closet. She never explored her sexuality therefore she doesn’t even know herself.
-Glamour, Specter and Nero she wouldn’t bother with, she has no personal grudge against them.
-She would like to kidnap Troy or Crow, but that would bring too much attention too quickly.
-Stray would be too easy, he would trip and tangle himself in a conveniently placed rope and knock himself out on the concrete floor.

However, Phoenix would love to kidnap her parents :smirk:

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[quote=“Nekumura, post:2360, topic:13887”]
Btw Guys, what do you think of Wraith? Is she creepy? Normal? Do you like her? Or not? ANd why?(Sooo many questions just to get what you think…)[/quote]
About Wraith, my MC is vary of here to say the least. Aside from her intenion of making MC ‘an obedient pawn’, I take it she was the one who collapsed cathedral-facility(?) not caring about survivour of here henchmen. As for my personal opinion too soon to say, we don’t even know her motives yet.

Also remembered that I forgot to comment the latest update.

Specter is precious. :blush: And yay we get to pet Ace! Is it bad that it was main reason MC desided to go for a coffee with Troy? :smile: Not that she dislikes Troy or free coffee.
And minor additions like option to react to the carnage we made when we were brought to life are very nice too.

Oh, and I hope it’s not too offtopic, but I wanted to share my interpretation of my MC’s costume.

She is very subtle with it. So subtle.

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It is amusing to see how different see Wraith. While some seem vary of her, some others, and I quote here ‘want to get in her pants’.

Yesh, Specter is awesome :smiley: On more than one aspect ^^
I am very fond of him and I am glad that I chose him as the winner back then <3

And oh my gosh, Void looks awesome <3
Very interesting costume, I must say! And she just looks really awesome.

I was working on Wraith for some time now, but I am just very bad in drawing females… urg…
I get the head, but everything else? nada :S

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This makes me wish I could draw :sob: so much potential for a Phoenix drawing…

Very impressive work!

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[quote=“Nekumura, post:2379, topic:13887”]
It is amusing to see how different see Wraith. While some seem vary of her, some others, and I quote here ‘want to get in her pants’.[/quote]
Heh, I think even if I did wanted to get in her pants, I would be a lil vary.

Thank you! Wanted to try to allude to her current alias, her death/injuries and her powers. Not sure it ended up looking icy enough. :sweat_smile: Oh, and splendid fairy wren i mentioned before, MC can’t escape bird motive even if they alias has changed.

Oh, It’d be very interesting to see her!

Thank you! :relaxed:

i hate both of them, so if they become intimate with each other (seems likely since vine get angry if the mc punch Troy), i dont care about those 2 → already in my hate list. I hope you add a update with some choice like:

mc: You defend Troy? ok, dont ever show your face in front of me anymore…

Ehm, do you perhaps mean Troy? We never punched Stray :open_mouth:

yup, dont know why i writed stray lol

Wait a minute, Vine gets angry at us if we punch Troy? I never noticed this before?

And then there is @Nathan_Faxon, oblivious to the world of Kalathol :wink:

Yep, it happens when you talk to her when you declined Troy’s offer.

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Oh I knew that part, but I didn’t think her mood was provoked because we punched Troy. I thought it was Vine being Vine :wink:

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Judging by her mood if you punch him or not, I think her bad mood makes her angry at you no matter what. The Birdboy punching seems more like a pretext to the anger for me.

@Nekumura
As for Wraith, there are some good points expressed earlier as to why she’s trying to reanimate the dead, especially after her first dramatic failure with the MC destroying the whole project. At this point I’m wary of her powers, shadow energy, some sort of heightened senses (Sensing us in the vent), and her mind control abilities. Fighting someone with mind control, as shown in Jessica Jones, can mean suddenly being attacked by sleepers who aren’t even aware they may be helping Wraith. Aside from that, I am more just curious as to how Crow and Birdy would stack up against her, while I wait on the sidelines to take out whomever “wins”.

Edit: Also, I’m very interested in what exactly Specter’s motives are. He’s obviously less than an outstanding citizen based on Glamour chasing him and his stab happy greeting of the guards, but what is he actually after? I’m willing to bet he’s not a thief like Stray, considering he didn’t nab anything from the lab. An assassin someone contracted to take care of Wraith maybe?

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I want to be Eeeeeeeeeeevil !

You will get the chance :smiley:

@Iggles
I never watched Jessica Jones (not that much into TV series, actually), but yes, I am aware that mind control is a serious problem in stories with no boundaries. That’s the reason why Wraith has limited power to all of her abilities.

And Specter is more than just a bystander with no voice to say anything at all ^^
But more to that another time.

@Moferiah
Thanks to you, I finally got Wraith to look how I want her to be XD
I think that in the near future, we will see my concept of her.
And hey, in around 2 Weeks I am having holidays :smiley:Soooo, more time for writing and drawing, wuhu!

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