Foundation of Nightmares - Volume Three of Demons Among Men [Beta] (Complete)

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I don’t know if this has already been mentioned (if it has please ignore this), but when romancing Vidar there’s a part where the options run out.
When he stays in the room with the MC after the part with Illil and the crematorium I chose to invite him into the bed, kissed his cheek, played chess, then the last option was to ask him about how he’s holding up after Illil. After that an error came up saying there were no options.

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Thanks for letting me know. I’ll look into it right now. It was supposed to only give you a chance for two different things to do, but there must have been an error in the code.

EDIT:
Okay, it should be fixed now.

EDIT 2:

MAJOR UPDATE:

I’ve added chapter six, bringing the word count to 83k. Let me know if you have any feedback! (Typos, bugs, suggestions, comments, etc.)

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reporting some typo… though i forgot to take a note of what chapter i found them :grimacing: :

The man in black has greasy, untidy hair and his gray eyes constantly dart around the clearing. Resting one hand on a dagger in his belt, he raises his the other and signs for quiet. The sunlight glints off a surprisingly ornate ring on his finger.

i’m sure you know what’s wrong with that sentence :grin:

You find yourself somewhere in the sky, where you can everything at once. The height doesn’t seem to bother you, and indeed, the whole experience is a pleasant one. The clouds are a perfect, wispy white, and there is just a gentle breeze as the sunshine warms your back.

can what exactly ?! :sweat_smile:

With that aside, you turn your attention to the food. All of the veggies and loafs of bread are splayed out on a battered wooden cutting board, with an old kitchen knife on the side. You get to work slicing the vegetables and cutting the loafs into fifths, then putting them all in piles. Not long after, Ceylar returns, his arms full with several canteens of water. Looking at your progress, he says, “Thanks, name. I can go ahead and finish bagging them up for our trip.”

forgot to put some code, i guess… :grin:

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Thanks. Those errors are fixed, now.

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Okay, everyone, the seventh and final chapter of this volume is now out on the demo, bringing the total word count to 95k.

Chapter One: 18k
Chapter Two: 9k
Chapter Three: 9k
Chapter Four: 13k
Chapter Five: 22k
Chapter Six: 9k
Chapter Seven: 12k

I’m now going to go back through the previous chapters and add another option to the majority of the choices in order to round out this volume more. Once I’ve done that, the total word count should be about 100k, and the word count per play through is approximately 40k. Let me know if you find any typos or bugs, or if you have any comments or suggestions.

EDIT:

So I’ve finished adding some more options to a lot of the choices, and now the writing part of this volume is done! Now all that’s left to do is some proofreading and bug fixing and then I’ll be ready to submit it to CoG as soon as I get the art back from Werner Mueck.

Thanks to everyone who provided their feedback.

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The demo link keeps saying not found, I’m not sure if you know about it.

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I took the demo off of Dashingdon since I wasn’t getting much feedback and I’m basically done with the volume at this point.

Could a mod close this thread, please? I’ll be submitting this to CoG in the next couple days.

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