Forsaken (WIP) |Chapter 5, Bard's path has been restored

so far at least 2 have reverired us as one. 1 the fire elemental 2 the bar lady, we can stop time though that is suspicious. and the beginning talked about it vaugly and the books read about it from the one “kid” made talk of god like. it all seems like we might be a godling, mortal god, or demigod at least but what do i know.

Edit: oh yea while on trial in heaven with a single spell we canceled out our handcuffs and a archangels heavenly weapon then struck them. when the archangel came up to us azezel warned that was a bad idea to approach us… i think he knew exactly how powerful we were and that the handcuffs were nothing more than cosmetics to us. then we asked wether someone was going to take us back or if we had to bring the mortal realm here (i hope that comment was just bluster otherwise DAMN) in the absences of god i suspect they are greatly concerned about the possibility of us declaring war on them and they are acting stronger than they appear to put us in our place, or catch us with our pants down.

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Didn’t Brendon take the mantle of Satan though?

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oh also @Bathala
choosing the currently selected choice in this picture freezes the game. i have tested it several times (both on my phone and on the pc) so far and every time it did it.

@Avi shhh, don’t spill Uriel’s secret!

@DontJudge
Nope.


@Drakeye

The elementals were right, MC is a fundamental but they’re not god, godling, or anything. They’re just a 400 IQ mage

Spoiler af, click at your own risk

MC was born with blue eyes. Eyes that can see through spells. (How the spell works, how it starts, how it ends).

This allowed them to copy/reverse/cancel spells with a simple spell they created.

But the more they used their visual prowess, the blinder they become.
They had two options: Heal the eyes and lose their ability or don’t heal the eyes and go blind.

Since the MC was so smart, they made a deal Uriel and Stolas. It was bound by a contract, if one of them broke it, the person dies.

Unfortunately, for them (entities), MC knew how to break the contract spell without dying. Hence, the Heavenly secrets and Demonic knowledge that the MC has.

Now, why does the MC have gold and purple eyes? I don’t know, you tell me :smirk:

Oh, and MC was bluffing about the teleport thing.

If y’all want spoiler stuff, I may or may not share them on Tumblr

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Is Mc in the top 10 list of strongest beings?

So did the MC find a way to use the angelic or demonic magic to heal his eyes and his ability?

Cuz it’s cool duh~ :sweat_smile:

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Yeah, imagine God flinging asteroids n shit and MC just reverses the spell in a blink of an eye


@Shazy333
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Priorities done right

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I. Love. It! The Deadpool-esque humour, the very sarcastic player-character, and a weird yet hilarious bunch of main characters mixed together into one.

I’m enjoying the comedy. Is this story a comedy? I’m reading through it as such. :grimacing:

What? No, pssh. Clearly, this is serious af :laughing:

This is magic and sarcasm

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@Bathala when will chapter 3 be finished, can’t wait

And quick question, what does the Eternity End (locket) do?

well i mean if the asteroid was already tangible and no longer affected by magic then all it would need is the initial momentum, so reversal of spell could it even work on a object thrown and not actually a part of a spell? they talk about this in a lot of games about immunity to magic and not the items being thrown/shot after the fact. would it even affect the rock at that point?

I’m talking about “pulling a space rock” spell and then turning it into “pushing a space rock” spell. :laughing:


@Shazy333 I’m not sure when I’ll be able to work on Chapter 3. And telling you what Eternity’s End does is spoiler :smirk:

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Hmmmm how about all the things it doesnt do…:innocent:

hmmm…well once its in motion from the initial action code jammer would probably cancel the additional magical force but not the already in motion effect as its just physics so that might need 2 spells to counter, the second being something to stop or redirect the currently existing momentum this was what i was meaning the effects of newton…then again our Mc can pretty much yell Time Stop and pants non gods/angels/Demons(?) and walk off.

Does Code Jammer stop newtons laws of motion that happen due to the magic already?

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It’s magic :confused:

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but…it…bu-…yea ok. :thinking::cry:

Well, it doesn’t tell time and the compass certainly doesn’t point at the correct direction.

Code Jammer cancels magic. That’s it. It can’t cancel an object thrown with magic, it may cancel the magic but won’t stop the object’s momentum. That’s why copying “pull space rock towards earth” spell and reversing it’s effect to “Push space rock away from earth” is how the MC does it. But yeah, the MC could simply freeze the rock using the archangels’ spell or teleport it to another dimension. The time freeze spell doesn’t work on angels,demons,gods,elementals,archfeys.


Magic is a mysterious branch of science :wink:

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Fixed it

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I’m getting it too