Final Sunset (E-Sports, Slice of Life, 20k WIP)

My friend there is no strength status in the game this game mainly focus on esport gamer but again it might get a rewrite for the status like it’s older sibling

It’s a good concept and i also love your “writing style(?)”. Hope this could be as big as PoMA :heart:

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False claims invented by Long Chen sympathisers!!!

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Can’t wait to show you my fanart of the ROs :drooling_face: Always a fan of your work, even if the work in itself is a questionable piece of fiction.

Pretty unique concept.

:hot_face: :hot_face: :hot_face:

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Had a sniper rifle but the sniping option was greyed out

Otherwise I liked it, this is an interesting concept and I hope to see more

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I see that my calibrations were off. My apologies. I am gonna step out of this conversation.

Nicky you have a talent for pulling in your readers. Well done!

I like how it flows and while the story sets the path the reader still feels like they have control.

It’s on my watchlist and has brilliant potential. I would love to see more, however understandably your attention is on POMA at present. A masterpiece in the works by the way.

This niche though doesn’t get enough love, and this setting does a great job of blending the fiction and non fiction. I’m intrigued to see how the mc’s parents are introduced, they currently seem to be both caring enough to domineer and have an interest in the mc’s future via study, but also couldn’t care less as the mc lives alone, has to work and pay his way through life. So the question is, why do I feel like their opinion of our choice matters when ultimately they seem not to care? Lol

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E-Sports IF, by the POMA author? I’m sold. I’m loving it so far, especially the looting mechanic. Feels like I’m actually playing a BR. I’ll be following it with interest, can’t wait to see more!

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This is weird but I kinda love how much I fucking HATE Andrei. I’m praying for the chance to just ruin him and his relationship. Also makes me wish I was a pettier person cause I’m not really interested in Vlada but I’d be really tempted to steal her just to cause him further anguish.

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Can we drop vlada like a bad habit and also I would love to have an option to tell the fucker after we punched him do not fucking ever blow smoke in our face and to use our phone to record what happened in the car ride secretly like a voice recording

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incoming soon…

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great demo can’t wait to see more

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Can’t wait for next update

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I love It.

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Will there be a tournament?

yes and not just one

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Oh boy, I can’t wait to lose multiple tournaments cause I get garbage ass loot. Just like real life…

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