Thanks, it will be corrected in the next update!
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Welp I can’t decide, all RO are hot damn! I literally blush everytime the choice options allow me to do that lol. But one thing missing, I always expect
Atin’s jealous reaction when Mc flirty with other RO. I got none of it. I was little bit disappointed but no problem no problem, maybe that can change and for further story ideas.
Also man, I love your sense of humor. Thank for made me laugh, you’re awesome 
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Woohoo thank you so much for the compliments! I actually don’t even remember that anyone complimented me on my humor before, so it’s suuuuper nice to hear people mention it 
Yes, Atin is not openly jealous yet, but they have some subtle reactions. One I can remember is when you leave the surgery room and you mention that you won’t put handcuffs on Roga. If you flirted enough with R, they make a low-key innuendo about it and if Atin’s flirt points are high enough, A glares daggers at R. At this point tho, the MC and Atin’s relationship is still professional enough that they won’t openly admit attraction to the MC. But if you encourage their flirting, that will change later 
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God I must no paying attention. Dont worry, your game is so much better than my boring class. I’m definitely gonna reread again, and your welcome💖
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Your humor on the first, or second page in was the whole reason I immediately bookmarked your WIP before finishing my first read through. It is very nice! 
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Ohh this is so good! I’m already head-over-heels for Roga, I love your writing style and the humor is fantastic! Can’t wait to see more
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Wow, I like humor and witty dialogs a lot so far, absolutly love our partner and part about bagels :3, other characters are also pretty nice.
Your writing style is clean and neat, story flow feels kinda?right?, natural, like classy cop?movie?..
Situation with elfs(pure breeding because of ?traditions?)little strange, but ok.
3 starts kinda weird, especially knowledge, but ok.
I spent the last fifteen minutes trying to figure out when did I write about bagels, and I still can’t remember 
Are you uhm… talking about the 3 job stats? What’s so weird about them? And why do you think the situation with the elves is a little strange? I will gladly answer anything if you have questions, but if you don’t explain what you mean by “a little strange and kinda weird”, then I can’t really help you.
Thanks for the compliments though!
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Just ran through the WIP again, and still say I quite enjoy it 
hoping to get more stuff on it as well
Kind of random question, are there other races in this world aside from humans, orks, elves? If so, will we get to interact with representatives of them?
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Yes, there are other races and you will meet some of them later on. You actually met one already: Jena Jakeman, the MC’s boss is 3/4 part human and 1/4 part phoenix for example. These races are just much rarer than the three main races (humans, orcs, elves).
I’m glad you are enjoying the story 
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I uploaded the first half of chapter 5. You can find the new link and everything included in the update up there 
. And as usual, I will be happy to hear your feedback 
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The new feature… WOW, just WOW! Thanks for your hard work and thank you for giving us new content. Super love it! The new feature that you’ve introduced makes us feel more connected to the characters. Salute!
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Thanks soo much!!! This was exactly my intention. I always see people headcanon what characters would chat about irl and then I thought… why not do that in-game? The chat was a nightmare to make, but I’m glad it was worth the effort
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I 
LOVE THE NEW FEATURE
Seriously, how can you do that?? Lord I shall give u more kudos:heart: and thank you for reminding me to eat lol
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I’m already feeling sick imagining the long list of codings you went through it and also the testings! THANK YOU FOR YOUR DEDICATION, REALLY.
No encountered bugs as of now.
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The update looks really cool! I didn’t run into any bugs, but I found this in an earlier chapter.
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Yeaaah, it wasn’t really the coding part that was hard, but every chat bubble is a separate picture and to size them all the same, crop them so that it looks good on different types of screens now THAT… I had to restart and redesign everything like at least 3 times I think? Uuggghhh I’m so glad I’m finished with that part.
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Whoops, thank you. I will include it in the next update 
I love your writing style, i love the new feature, you’re unique and i love it 
And i love Quinn, please give me more Quinn
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I love the update!
The texting feature looks awesome ~ and I don’t mind Roga calling my MC sexy. LMAO!
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