Not so sure I’m all that fond of the first person narrative here, as that makes it feel the character is less my own and more a pre-determined protagonist over whose shoulders I’ve been invited to look. I assume that this is your intention and that we’re intended to have little influence over the character, personality and, sigh, sexuality of the main character here?
I also suggest offering some preset names to choose from during character creation.
So does the title indicate that the protagonist will have the option to become Emperor?
Because I am SO ready for that! Even my profile picture is a painting of Wu Zetian! 
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@mistylavenda That’s the goal. Do you want to be an Emperor or Empress? 
@idonotlikeusernames Yes…that’s my goal. This is after all my first time using Choice Script. It’s hard for me to really understand how to do certain things and manipulate the story as I want. Add that to reading up some Female Protag. novels and thinking of how to do this along with Relationship stats and such…I’m afraid this will add more delays to the story writing. I will keep this in mind though for the future.
Regarding preset names, I’m not too happy with my Preset names so I trashed them. If this is reallllllyyyy a problem I’ll add in the names…but they’re terrible though. 
@Terrell_Williams @Nick_K Thanks man! I actually took my time thinking of these…I’m glad you like it!
About Black Spider…there will be a teeny tiny bit of changes.
@Classified I did not continue after you choose your powers as I have to understand how to code the Protag. to tread different routes atm. I always update where you stop off with Status on here!
@Thunder-Man Hey man! I actually studied Cantonese a bit so I DO understand that.
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@UnknownVariable
Why i can’t go forward after choosing art?
I even replay it four time too try all four art,but there always text about something illegal
@Vattena It still being worked on
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Oh, my God! I understand Cantonese, but I talk a bit. My two bros are better than me and one of them can both write and read.
Update! No story updates today, but I added one more art, made loads of edits and changes plus added one scene! (It’s just one…scene…) I’ll make some more scenes later on as I have to decide where to put em.
@Thunder-Man Wow well I can write a little bit, but I can’t read at all!
@Vattena Still being worked on like Williams said. Sorry about that!
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Just edits, busy this week as its Finals…
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@UnknownVariable please let me know if you ever want this reopened.