I mentioned before that I was participating in a game jam. Now my submission is up along with the other participants. To check them out, go here: http://borderhouseblog.com/?p=9332
I just used the browser’s Back button a few times instead of the Restart link and ended up with a very confusing story the second time through (because Twine kept the variables, apparently).
Anyway, after reading it the right way, I enjoyed the concept of meeting… [select the white spoilery text below]:
and rescuing characters that you could play in other playthroughs.
I kind of expected a Hunger Games “down with the establishment” ending possible, instead of just “happily ever after” ones, but I realize you were under a time constraint.
I played as the vampire and just walked out of the door instead of using a portal and it said first that I killed the guy with the war hammer then it said that he killed me? It was very confusing
I’m not sure if this is important to you or not, but there’s a spelling error quite early in the game. I chose the serpent character and I just got past the garuda and went through the dungeon, killing people with a sword I stole. I’m not sure if that helps say where I am in the game or not, but the line with the spelling error is:
You come into a room with four portals and a great door. A plague beside each portal denotes their destination.
I believe that is supposed to read “plaque,” not “plague.”