My advice as an amateur writer: You don’t need to go crazy with all of these identities such as trans, lgbt, etc. Have just a few (three is good) so that you will not have to spend as much time going back and re-writing scenes just so that you can include all of them.
But the whole idea for this story is something everyone feels included in. So leaving identities out would kinda defeat the purpose.
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When all the necessary perpetrations were complete your mother guided you down the halls to your new room,
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perpetrations? preparations
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You think that having a princess of the Eastern Lands staying with you would give you a first hand sourse to learn about her home. You decide to make a mental note that it might be a good idea to do some reading before she arrives in order to have a good list of questions to ask her.
sourse? source
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The next morning you meet Amalia at her room so that she can accompany you to class, your parents decided that while she was staying it would be a good idea that she share in your education. With Amalia in tow you make your way towards the library, a sudden realization hits you that once you arrive Jamison will have another history lesson in store for you. The revolation comes as a welcome relief, a smile curls along you lips and your pace picks up with a new enthusiasm.
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revelation
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You made your way out towards the barracks where you had been instructed to meet him, as soon as you stepped outside you could feel the warth of the sun bathing your fair skin in warmth, a gentle spring breeze rolled softly through your black hair.
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warmth
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The afternoon passes quietly, almost distractingly so, every time your mind started to wander away from the calming technique that you were supposed to be practicing Master Jun would give you a small shock of magic. It wasnt enough to cause any real harm to you but it certainly made you wonder if he could read your mind, it also reminded you that Master Jin was watching you closely making it a little difficult to focus your thoughts. By the end of the afternoon you had a rather good grasp on calming your mind and concentrating your focus.
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wasn’t
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Ha! Good story so far! Keep it up.
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Maybe you don’t need to, but you also don’t need to go crazy with all these identities such as cis, heterosexual, etc. Just a few is fine; don’t feel any pressure to include more cisgender heterosexuals than you already had in mind.
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As said yeah the whole point of me even writing a game was for inclusion, the plot is not near and dear to my heart or anything, just something I thought of drunk 
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(Here’s hoping this doesn’t count as more than two weeks xD) I love this. @Lizzy, you are a genius! This game is great. I love all the characters, especially Amalia 
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It shouldn’t, it’s been only 13 days.
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Awww you’re so sweet 
Thank you! I’m hoping to actually update this in the new year 
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Will that one finally get us to the cute guys?
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lol Well I don’t know if they are cute, not my area of expertise…but before I had hit my wall in writing it I was working on the event that will introduce the main ROs, and sadly some of them are indeed guys 
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Happy new year to you too @Lizzy. 
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Thank you, and to you…though it’s still 2016 here I hope your new year has started well. I myself am waiting for my darling girl to finish family obligations in order to video chat 
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This sounds amazing I can’t wait to hear more about it.
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