Destiny of the Exile (WIP with Demo Updated Nov 24)

i have to add unromanceable RO (straight cute guys and racist cute guys who stole your first kiss) to that list. im still heartbroken btw :sob: :broken_heart: lol

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You know, you could start your own thread on this (“NPCs you wish you could romance, but can’t”, or something similar) and use it to vent in. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I’d certainly have a few to add to it.

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i take your advice :grin: Unromanceable NPC

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Would be amazing if there were like someone as powerful as you and your enemy. And then like she/he captures you and you spend some time with them and then like you tell in love. But to make it more unique, the relationship wouldn’t be all lovely dovely. You somehow escape and with every or few chapter she’s there to hunt you and she actually wants you to die or to take her bounty reward or whatever. But with every try the MC connects with her more and more and she the Same. And it all started from hate.! Something like that! And then you would have a choise to either kill her, let her, change her (towards good), hunt with her, or like surrender or be bad with her.

Wow, I have a huge crush. It’s like the same from story samurai of hyuga. Junko if I remember correctly… huge freaking crush!

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Well I can certainly say there are no racists in my game, but I can’t exactly do anything to stop you from walling for a straight guy since…well it happens, had my heart broken by straight girls before :cry: :broken_heart:

@Colt_WB well I don’t really see someone like that fitting into this story, I do see how they could in the other story I want to write. A character like Junko reminds me a little too much of one of my ex girlfriends, hopefully after I finish Exile I will be in a place where I feel comfortable with writing a character like that without breaking down into tears every few minutes.

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Have you decided what kind of stats and magic yet?

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I have a general idea what I want to do with the stats, I’m actually working on them now because I’d like for the next update to actually include the framework for them as well as choosing your class.

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Oh sorry! Didn’t want to touch that subject :sweat_smile: And to make it a little better I meant like lesbian relationship. Like jezus! that was hot!!!

Are you hitting on @Lizzy there? lol.

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:joy::joy::joy: why?she’s gay? didn’t noticed it!:joy:

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We saw what you did there lol

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I’m :innocent: :angel: … really.

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Well that’s my fault for being so coy about being a lesbian :yum:

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Looks like I’m a little late to the party, but I’ll comment anyways. I enjoyed this short demo and am excited for what’s to come for this CoG. It seems like you still have much more planned for this, can’t wait for the next update!

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Thank you so much for the kind words :smile: I do have quite a lot that I plan to do with this, right now I’m working my way to introducing the majority of the ROs :heart:

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I wait with bated breath!

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So minor update, I added some more choices in the prologue to give the MC some opinions on some of what’s going on, removed the original start, broke up some paragraphs and added a couple page breaks.

I apologize at how unproductive I’ve been lately with this and really am trying to get my head out of the clouds and split my focus from only the most wonderful girl in the world to her and this too, it’s just not easy for me :blush:

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Your fans and friends believe in you. Keep up the work, we are all proud of you :heart:

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You said it is a minor update but I think it’s a lot better than before :blush: you’re doing great :3

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