This should be fixed now! Thank you.
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Kind of ironic with the corruption being what it is though when the gang was originally was supposed root it out.
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Yep! Frank’s a hypocrite. Greed and power can change people, even those who started with good intentions. But I guess he never wanted to completely weed it out, he wanted to take advantage of it to benefit his people. At least that’s what he wanted initially.
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It’s perfect it just needs to be polished and displayed oh after checking the stats could you please add a cheat mode because wow there is no way that those stats don’t affect the story or decisions
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Should probably check through again, I ran into a decent chunk of pronoun bugs
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Pronoun bugs? Can you explain specifically what you mean? Were you getting the wrong pronouns and which ones were you using?
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Polished—thanks for your feedback! Could you be more specific? Are you referring to the writing style, grammar, or something else? What exactly needs improvement?
As for a cheat mode, it won’t be necessary since the game isn’t designed to be overly difficult. Stat checks will be fairly easy, primarily serving as a tool for character development rather than strict obstacles. There will be multiple ways to succeed in a situation, and failing a stat check won’t necessarily mean failure.
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I don’t know what specific ones they were talking about, but there are a couple places (mostly during A’s perspective) where a male A is referred to with female pronouns
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That’s odd—I played through it, and everything seemed fine, but I’ll check again. 
It shouldn’t be doing that. Also, If you guys come across this issue while playing, I’d really appreciate it if you could take screenshots and send them my way!
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Experienced this 2
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That’s great I thought I was mistaken but multiple times my MCs wife is referred to as a he/him
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Ok, i’ll have to look through. Sorry about this guys.
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Do you remember which places this happened? Was it one specific area or was it all throughout the story?
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Have I begun reading it, I have not but I love the premise,. It’s not my normal type of game I would play but I’ll guarantee I’ll love it
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Thanks, I appreciate you giving it a try 
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I’m enjoying the premise so far. I’m not sure if this is the kind of feedback you’re looking for, but it would probably be a good idea to read up on the grammar rules for writing dialogue; there were quite a few paragraphs in which multiple people were speaking, which made for some fairly confusing reading.
With regard to a RO that’s at more of a midpoint for morality, I like the idea of someone with whom the MC went to school (possibly a friend of the low-income MC), but who couldn’t escape poverty and ended up a low-level member of the gang. It’d be fun to climb the ladder with someone you knew.
Also, my character absolutely would’ve thrown the spouse out and filed for divorce as soon as she had the bandwidth. I was playing a resilient, low-income, abuse survivor – she would’ve immediately reclassified her spouse as another betrayer and moved on without them. The moment it became clear to her that the person she trusted most put her and her daughter in danger, the relationship was over. I’m not sure if that’s an option somewhere, but I didn’t see it in my playthrough.
Anyway, this in an interesting take on crime story fiction, and I look forward to reading more.
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Yes, I’ve heard the feedback about the dialogue being unclear, and I’m working on improving it—thanks for pointing it out! As for kicking A out immediately, I get where you’re coming from, but narratively, it wouldn’t work. They have too much going on for a clean break right away. As mentioned in the features, divorce is an option later in the story, but it’s a slow and complicated process. Plus, MC can’t just kick A out since they also own the home. You can choose to have a strained or broken relationship with A and eventually move on, but a complete separation won’t happen overnight—not to mention, A wouldn’t give up that easily and accept things happening like that. Thanks for reading!
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The ‘Start joking, and laughing hysterically. What? It’s how you cope.’ option is giving an error.
Outside of that, great introduction. A really needs to get their shit together.
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Just fixed it—thanks for the heads-up! It should work now, and sorry about that. And yeah, A has a lot of work to do on themselves. 
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Too early to say much, but I’m curious enough to keep an eye out for updates.
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