Oh, the āherā is referring to the mother, but Iāll see if I can make it clearer!
And yes, please report all the bugs, typos, and inconsistencies you find.
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Oh, sorry! I re-read that and I can totally see what you meant in the first place. My bad!
iām liking everything so far and the Character Page Viewer is a pretty cool feature.
There are few errors iām getting from the CPV.
List of errors
The choice picked was āmy own storyā not āme and my siblingās storyā.
The choice picked was āi kept the old photoā.
From the Character Page Viewer:
Latest Stats at the End of the Demo
Differences from CPV and End of Demo Stats: Vocabulary and why Mom left us.
i also want to ask. Is English the default favorite subject of the MC? or will there be another chance to pick a favorite subject (other than being the top student choice)?
For those who want to read about Remy and Ryan, i'm going to include their character pages*.
Remy Valdez
211312112523f132222241143473631241115a212132113211341223215122233i2122122133132322|066087025061072059020066053|081075074087078050|040004080101010472[Rebecca|Remy|Adrian|Ryan|Valdez]
Ryan Valdez
122122141411f241121122141473413141112a112212313111344434213214121c3132241333242321|074017043078037037016057048|071031083076077031|090105010201010491[Adrian|Ryan|Rebecca|Becca|Valdez]
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Yaaaaay! So happy the demo finally came out! Just finished my first playthrough. I love it!
I love how in the character page viewer thereās a counter for the number of times youāve hugged and cried. I just think thatās hilarious!
I noticed that Bās and Patrickās little images in the Relationships section donāt load. Also, before I even met B, their name showed up as Beatrice.
Speaking of which, I canāt get over the gorgeous graphics! They must have taken you so long to make every single one! I wish I could draw that well!
I loved the story overall, and I canāt wait for the next update! 
My Character Page code, if anyone wants it
241321121213e121312211533132236222217l1111133232321112111132d6214h2222121155111111|064081079089045011025035071|068077092092069028|211300020123010473[Riley|Rowan|Ryker|Rio|Santos]
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I donāt wanna report something that isnāt even wrong again, but just in case! I think I keep getting the same error: my brother keeps being referenced as female.
Man I hope Iām not misinterpreting things again 
But I THINK that My sister should be My brother? He also seems to change MCās gender and his gender when talking about the story he wrote. But maybe that was intentional??? IDK
EDIT: Iām a bit confused. What promise did MC break? Her twin got super mad at her and she says she broke a promise and I donāt understand what did she (or I?) do wrong 
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If my memory serves me right, the promise is being a good sibling to your twin. i believe that promise was broken when the MC and the twin had a heated argument when Maggie, their mother, didnāt come back home like she promised on their 8th birthday.
Did i miss anything, Franzinyte?
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I got the same issue, but the other way around - my sister is showing up as āmy brotherā with those icons.
Edit: I just finished my first playthrough, andā¦what are the three secrets? I found the third one, apparently, but Iām not sure what it wasā¦
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Secret #1 is related to siblings
Secret #2 is related to someoneās age
Secret #3 is related to a dress-up experience
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i missed this game so much :,) your writing is amazing and yeah rn feeling bad for being mean to twin brother also all of the friends are cool and precious love them
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I picked āleia and Lukeā then I saw greyed out āādoesnāt that mean our fatherā¦āā and Iām not even a Star wars fan but it made me laugh outloud! 
Man, you have been missed and so did your story! Welcome back!!! 
āMOO-TANTS DETECTED. MOO-TANTS DETECTED.ā buahahahaha, Iām using that when I play xcom
Woot! What a ride! I L 
VED THIS STORY SO SO MUCH!!!
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The bug hunt continues! Claire is my MCās name, not my brotherās.
EDIT: I finished! It was lovely! The ending got me really excited to see more of B! That stat bar having a CHEMISTRY option? Oh, my, my. (Btw I think I found a grammar mistake in that last part: āHeās not with his friends, but so am Iā Should be āBut neither am Iā right? English is not my first language, but I think itās like that.
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I updated the demo to fix all the issues mentioned so far. I just noticed that the party member screen looks horrible on my phone, so Iāll fix the relationship hearts later. I knew it was a bad idea splitting them into two images.
v2.01 Hotfix
ā¢ Save system re-enabled.
ā¢ Character Page Viewer fixes.
ā¢ Fixed Twin relationship icons displaying the wrong gender.
ā¢ Fixed Party Members showing characters if theyāre not in your party.
ā¢ Minor edits and fixes.
Iām not sure. I can easily add a second one, but it wonāt really have much of an effect.
@Pinmat135 Thanks! 
The reason thereās hug and cry counters is because there are achievements tied to them.
Also, whoops, the reason Bās and Patrickās icons arenāt showing up is because theyāre not supposed to be there yet! I think I fixed it.
@Kirlett Oof yeah, the relationship icons are definitely an error. Also, yikes, thatās an awkward spot to have that error on. 
By the way, where exactly was the chemistry option showing? I donāt think thatās supposed to show up (yet).
@Abe is correct, MC broke their promise to their mother of being a good sibling. I think you just missed itāthe twin mentions that exactly. Iāll just leave what happened in the fight exactly to the readerās imagination.
All secrets can be discovered when talking to Roselyna. You will always discover either #2 or #3 but it depends on your silly stat. You will get a chance to discover the other one later.
You will be able to see all the secrets you discovered later when you can access the diary.
@E_RedMark @khzma Thanks! Iām glad you enjoyed the rewrite so far! Thereās quite a bit of references in all the genres 
Anyway, thanks to everyone who has replied (and shared their character codes) so far 
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At the end, Bās stat bar showed 100% Rivaly 0% Chemistry
Btw, another thing I noticed: my twins are supposed to be inseparable, but the text keeps saying āhe [the brother] hates me more than usualā. I understand they fought and all that, but that same day they were being BFF all nice and supportive of each other and now itās like āhe hates me, I mean, he always hated me, but now MOREā and Iām like ??? [Also sad! I donāt want you to hate me dammit Iām trying hard here dear twin 
]
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The reason why iām asking about the favorite subject was because of the last line in the profile:
iām assuming that the favorite subject and what i want to be when i grow up would change once the choices for them appears.
i also saw the B's stats bar in my playthroughs. Why didn't i notice that before?
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Hello, I updated the demo again so that the codes are easier to copy. The downside is that thereās more potential for error because you need to remove the spaces in between them, but I see no other option at the moment other than totally overhauling it. Iām not even sure if itās worth the effort.
I also temporarily removed the ārelationshipsā image in the party member screen so it fits smaller screens better, but I plan to add it back in the future. Iāve tried adjusting it several times already (it sucks being a perfectionist, ugh) but nothing was working, and I donāt have the energy right now to keep testing it. The first locket notification option also now shows relationship changes because disabling it was messing with the formatting.
That said, thisāll be the last update again for a while (remember that I just wanted to release the demo to get it out of my system).
@Kirlett Ohh, now I see. Thatās the old name for the relationship variables before I switched to the heart icons. I just updated it to show hearts instead.
The attraction points in the character page viewer is actually called chemistry points (which will be used to determine crush compatibility) but Iām still not really sure how that will work yet. To be honest, Iām not sure if thereās enough interest for it because of the younger characters. (I would make a poll, but I havenāt introduced all the main characters yet so Iām holding it for now.)
Hehe. Theyāre inseparable most of the time, not totally inseparable. The short stories just brought back really bad memories, but donāt worry, theyāll be able to talk again later in the chapter (which will open up a sidequest).
(Side note: This is why I love writing the emotional MC. I also dislike writing the twin fighting scenes so there wonāt be too many of them, but itās kinda necessary for the plot.)
The āwhat I want to be when I grow upā line will change in Chapter 4. If you remember, thereās a speaking test the next day, and that will be the topic (which would also change everyoneās character classes).
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Iām interested in puppy love! Itād be so cute Not only Rosie and Wayne get to have all the fun! Lowkey shipping MC and B already 
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Omg! 45 minutes na lang!
Nagulat ako, OP. hahahah!
This is a very fun demo 
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Oh my god, I am already in love with this whole story! qwq
As a Filipino myself, I was shocked to see some familiar words sprinkled in the text [Like āpoā, ākuyaā, āateā, and that stuff!] And I absolutely ADORE IT! 
And oh my gee, those little āreferencesā in the classroom? It really reminds me of when I went to school qvq The classroom cleaners, Ibong Adarna, and Florante at Laura oOoOh my godS this is giving me so many flashbacks.
The relationships with each character feels so authenthic and real for me- I got really hurt myself when the twins started fighting, I was like: ānOOOOoooOo donāt fight eachother TwTā
All in all, I love it 
and Iām excited for when the full story gets released ^^
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Oh my GGGGGG this. Is. AMAZING! I remember back when this was starting, I once said the Taglish implementation was kind off awkward, but now, it is so VERY SEEMLESS! I am shocked at the quality of improvement this has. Not only was the Writing improved, with better pacing and dialogue, but the graphics itself improved as well! By a lot actually! I love the tiny touches that makes it feel like an RPG, that Undertake and Among Us reference though lol.
But most importantly, what this demo did the best is to take me back to the time of elementary. Iāve never seen a part of my life feel so very realized in fiction ever, Filipino elementary life is just such a niche topic but God this takes me back! Those were the simpler times, wow. It is so horrifying y accurate, that you even used the section names as a basis for stats! Now THAT is clever!
My only concern now is how niche this is going to be. This looks like it is done specifically for a more Filipino audience, I am only concerned with how stuff like Filipino words not translated might confuse more English Speaking folks. Will there be an option for Translation for that? Or are you going to keep the Taglish roots? Lol
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Just found if you give alliterative names to the kids you get a stat change, love it!
Also I adore how the whole game is laid out? Getting a +Silly notification in bubbly red writing is just delightful.
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