There were a couple of surprises at that end. 
Iām currently writing the next two stories at the same time. I have a plan for one more beyond those, but weāll see if I can get there.
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The person who brought us together was the villain himself.
And there was also an unanswered question. What happened to the storm that made people disappear? Are those people really dead?
And what about the rest of the country and the world? What does the rest of the world think about people who can fly, run super fast, cast magic, etc.?
Sorry for so many questions.
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You may want to spoiler about villain since probably not everyone played the demo.
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Congrats @Dvalor53 I folowed this quitely but canāt found time to give proper feedback.
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Congrats!! I loved the game! I never saw one with so many build options for power and with so many details on them. Itās literally possible to emulate any here from comics. A fantastic work!!!
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Congrat for the sucess of the story itās one of the best Iāve read, altho I havenāt gotten around to read the full version yet ( I used to read the demo every day (many times) before it was reduced so I kinda know it almost by heart) guess I kinda killed my own hypeā¦ also just small question is getting fired in the IT road still the only ending? Itās kinda my favorite path but I only ever got that one (or maybe Iām doing something wrongā
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Yes, theyāre dead. As for the storm, Iāll get to that in a later story.
Thatās something else Iāll lightly touch on in the sequel.
Itās no problem!
Thank you! You should also look into Hero or Villain: Genesis by Adrao. His power selection is more numurous. Mine is more customizable. There are actually a lot of heroes you canāt build from comics, but I appreciate your words all the same.
The CEO path is the only one that can avoid being fired. This sets up new career options in the sequel. Thank you for your kind words. I have a lot of improvment as a writer and storyteller.
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I just started this and noticed that the mass replace also caused problems with āitāsā/āit isā (specifically āas useful mentally and emotionally as itās physically.ā should be āas it is physically.ā) - going through and double-checking every use of āitāsā might be a lot of work, though. 
Edit: Iāll keep a list of typos as I go and send them to support once Iāve finished the game (unless the author says theyād prefer to get 'em via a DM).
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Either is fine. Itāll come to me either way.
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I just finished the book, again. And I was wondering any idea of when youāll bless us with the demo of the second book
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After reading some of the comments i see the sequel may be a different MCā¦ Is this true? What will the Sequel be about? What happens with this current MC? Kinda would have love to continue this MCās story a bit more. I donāt know,
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Iām not sure yet. The plan had been to wait a while, as Iām writing parts two and three at the same time. I want to get most of both stories done so I can give semi-regular updates and release both of them close to each other. However, reception for Dawn of Heroes has been poor, and thatās making me hesitant to share without taking more time on scenes.
Yes, the next story will follow a new MC. They are to become the MCās sidekick in part three of this series. I have a hard time calling it a sequel since it explains whatās going on with this new character during the events of Dawn of Heroes. I normally think of Part Three as the true sequel since it follows both MC1 and MC2 after their first adventures.
It follows a teen whose family moves to Ryker the night the storm hits. Itās a sci-fi murder mystery with a killer on the loose. The events of this mystery eventually led them to gain their own set of powers.
They will return in part three! I fear that a lot of people wonāt like me doing this, but the plan is to give these two characters their own stories before bringing them together.
I had heard some things in the forum on Reddit, and now Iām curious, from what youāve heard, how do you personally find the reception that the book has been getting so far? Fair, unfair, constructive in a way?
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Sold!
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I find most of it to be fair. Iāve never thought of myself as a good writer, and I finally got critical criticism, it just happened after it was released. Not the order that Iād like.
Iām leaving out some very key details, so weāll see if you keep that thought when I release it.
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I mean, Iām pretty much going to buy anything twentieth-century-to-future with superheroes in it anyway. 
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