Yeah it’s September. I’m going to write September, so everyone knows it’s not June. 
Thanks, that you’ve mention it.
Of course it’s ok! I’d be happy to answer your questions!
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The demo is out. I’m really sorry that it’s so short, but I’m sick so I couldn’t write much.
I wanted to bring the demo out, so you know, my reasons why I’m writing this and a bit about the backround about the story.
Link is in the discription.
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hope you get better soon 
tried the yp and think it’s a great start :), does at least give a good feel of what the game will be like, like the selection of stats noticed a few typos, but I guess it’d be better to point them out at a later stage? keep up the good work!
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Thanks! Glad you liked my selection of stats.
Yeah I noticed some typos too, but please feel free to correct me and show me my typos.
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ok, sure
“I’m writing this story for someone that has gone through something like that” *like this?
"because I didn’t thought that the pepole who done it " *because I didn’t think that the people who did it
"has nightmares and has to go to a terapist, " *therapist
“The sad thing is that his sister dosen’t believe him, she things everybody is lying” *doesn’t *thinks everybody
“of her brother, but was just to young and now her brain dosen’t want her to rember it” *too *doesn’t *remember
"often visited my mothers aunt and unkle " *uncle
"Peter once told my grandmother that he rather would have her has his mother, if you thing about with " *Peter once told my grandmother that he would rather have her as his mother, if you thinnk about with
"my grandmother would defently acted diffrent than just to think it’s nothing " *my grandmother would definatley have acted diffrently than just to think it’s nothing
"My grandmother sister was always mean to my grandmother, we don’t know why, but I think a reason for is that they’re " *My grandmother’s sister was always mean to my grandmother, we don’t know why, but I think a reason for this is that they’re
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Hmm there isnt much to go on yet. But I’ll be anticipating it eagerly~! I also suggest you spread out your sentences with paragraphs for easier comprehension. Best of luck!
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A little short to judge, but the concept is very well and looking at the stats reveals a bit more of the game. I’m still eager for it, though. Good luck!
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Finally, a dark game… and its painfully short with no real choices…
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Thanks for you suggesting.
I have already changed it. Please check out my newest link and tell me if it’s better like that.
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Thanks.
Yeah I know it’s short, but at the moment I don’t really have much time to work on it. It will be longer with my next update. But I’m glad you like the concept and the stats.
Hope to see you around.
Yeah sorry about that, but I hope you stick around, because this game will include a lot of choices.
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Thank you!
You’ve been very helpful.
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