You wrote this out as an anime type book characters feel a certain way can’t place it but they just work, love that the reader chooses the kinda MC they want to be, also making the very first roommate we meet this interesting s a good hook (I’m sensing N vibes from death note from him), Also the game testers have good character design and the writing itself s really good grammatically as well, it kinda feels like every vr anime ever and I m here for it literally have no complaints I’m just here inflate egos where it’s due.
Also asking for the typical talented cold tsundare who you win over gradually one of the ROs… I’m asking for a friend
Yo do you think it would be possible to hide combat stats When not in other world? I feel it may add more to immersion if you don’t feel it necessary then don’t bother I just thought it would be a cool feature to implement
It definitely has SAO vibes coming from it. You did a great job with the personality’s. You pick a choice and plays out exactly as it’s meant to with the personality that the mc set.
As far as I can tell I haven’t found any bugs or glitches. The grammar and spelling is on par. The only problem is that it’s short but it’s a new project so it can’t be helped. It interesting so far even it is just one chapter
As for this, well, Oumi is very tsundere (but not the super violent kind) and Yuria is kinda? of a tsundere. Hope either of them appeal to you…r friend!
I could, but I think it would be quite troublesome because things you do in real life will affect those combat stats as well, and I’m the type that keeps checking the stat screen to make sure I’m not going the wrong direction haha. If many people ask for this, I could try it and see how people react, but as for now, I’ll think I’ll keep it visible. Or I could add it as another section in the stats menu, like ‘relationships’ and the ‘glossary’.
@Christopher_Bull Thank you! I’m glad you like it so far, despite how short it is lol.
I know of Overlord, but I haven’t watched it so I don’t really know what it’s about. I actually don’t really watch a lot of Isekai stuff, to be honest, haha.
Don’t worry, I’m not a fan of the games that heavily rely on stats either. This is probably going to be more choice based than anything. And I’ll do my best to make sure it doesn’t feel like you’re picking a wrong path, just a different one with different outcomes.
Of course, if any time in the future you feel that the game is starting to feel unfair, you are welcome to point it out!