One-hundred percent! 
We’ve finished a draft. It’s not exactly where I want it to be, but it should suffice for now. I expect the final revised chapter to be near doubled the length, unless some of the cut stuff doesn’t make it back in.
I may have gotten a little convoluted with the coding in this one, we shall see!
Great catches! Thanks for the updates, I’ll look into those!
Chapter 8 uploaded!
https://cogdemos.ink/go/3894
The MC is built different when you choose the truly independent path instead of relying on ShadowDuke. A one-man army in the making—future Godfather.
May the city answer to you, and you alone!
I think there may be a bug with the interview at chapter two-three: I answered all the reporter’s questions, but the article claims I refused to comment on some of them anyway.
Did you get screenshots by any chance?
Not yet, but I can take them. I just need to know which part I need to take them of.
The article where it says you didn’t comment.
Generally, just take a screenshot at the point where you notice something wrong, and explain in detail why it’s wrong.
Would it help if I got screenshots from the interview questions too?
I doubt it, although it might help if you tell them what answer you gave for each question.
Gotcha! I’ll try to give it a look, but if you do get the chance to send a screenshot of the results or let me know what options you picked, that will help me track down where in the code something might be going wrong.
Much appreciated!
I’ll try to do that tomorrow, I got hit by a migraine and need to get some sleep now.
Found some silly errors and went through and fixed a bunch of them - Updated version here: https://cogdemos.ink/go/3894
I think this novel is rather ambitious, it tries to be many things at once.
It feels like a dystopian-modern-punk setting with magic on top and I don’t think it fits it well, there is little resemblance to the real world or the time period, too many things going on at once.
The way text is formatted and the overall environment suggests a more modern era than an older one and the pacing is rushed, i don’t feel connected to any of the characters.
Oh and it wouldn’t be until 1940s~ that practical choppers would be actually used properly.
I do understand it’s a fictional setting of course but i do not see the appeal because there are too many things going on at once.
As always, you’re the author and it’s up to you what you do, this is just my view on this, whatever its worth, there’s no malice in my reply.
It’s fantasy. That’s kind of the point.
Which i have already acknowledged and I’m well aware of, if you read what i said.
Then why did you think “there is little resemblance to the real world” was a useful thing to say?
Look, I’m a reviewer and beta tester, and I’m the last person you’ll ever hear saying all feedback has to be positive. But if what you have to say basically boils down to “no offense, but the fundamental premise is hopelessly misconceived,” that’s when “don’t like, don’t read” applies.
Working on game descriptions and screenshots for the upcoming product pages. 
