I think this will be good!! Seems interesting so far even with just that little bit.
Can’t wait for more updates and future stories 
Not very long so not much feedback I can provide. But the writing style is definitely captivating so far, so I have high hopes for this on that note. Moving on enjoyed the side characters little profiles provided. Can’t wait to interact and meet them. Also see just what powers the MC has in store 
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This is an interesting premise! Can’t wait to see more.
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No bro please add the shooting mini-supermen out of the hands power bro
It’s critical to the entire plot
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So far the demo seems promising.
Hmm. Maybe let the MC encounter just one descendant of their best friend or a close colleague? Because no matter how many generations have passed and how diluted the DNA is, they’re still the descendant of that person. Just a suggestion, of course.
Anyway, I’m interested in seeing how this story develops. Keep it up.
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Please tell me how MC knows what cars, buses, trains, elevators, etc. are.
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They aren’t being transferred from medieval to futuristic, rather, it’s modern day to sci-fi.
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Damn nice WIP
I’m really excited for this! Good luck on your writing/coding journey!
Hello
i like your story but i can’t pass when i click to the tower. it’s normal ?
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I seem to be stuck on the tower
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That’s the end. I was pretty sure there was a bit more before though, but the story ends with that.
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For some reason whenever it reaches the “To the tower” part it seems to be stuck buffering
I’ve asked this question and in fact it’s the end of demo.
Lol read the comment, I literally said it. That’s the end of the demo.
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oh my bad
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