Corruptant - Shattered Mind: WIP (Working Tittle) [Updated 11/25/2022]

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I just want to say that it supposed to have Sol’s gender, but it doesn’t have it. (Never posted anything before, so im new to posting.)

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Thanks ^ just a error on my end for not adding {

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OMG I can’t imagine what a man SOL looks like swoons

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Okay a coding mistake I think- When talking to the reaper I got the dialogue for the “Aren’t we enemies?” question three times instead of getting to ask the question I was supposed to ask.

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If this is the latest chapter then yeah there is a bunch of shiz there that needs fixing, sorry about that will make a mental note! And thanks!

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Not sure if it has been reported already, but I see that when we choose our MC to have the black eyes mark, there’s supposed to be a unique dialogue when we choose MC’s eye color. Except it never took me to that part (“Considering my so-called curse, it is rather difficult to distinguish the color of my eyes”). It continues as if my MC has normal eyes.

Also by pitch black eyes I assume this includes the sclera - which is why the text says we look demonic?

Yeah all black, and ill take a look at that when i get the chance!

The black eyes are not 100% solid black, when I chose blue eyes after choosing the black eye curse an NPC told my character words to the effect of “When I look closely, I can see the streaks of blue in your black eyes.”

So the eye color selection is still pertinent.

Just like “hazel eyes” aren’t a solid color but a combination of green, brown, and gold.

But before that I did find it contradictory, so yeah that could have been explained better.

Edit- Found it. The werewolf lady stated "“Not a bad look,” she remarks, “I can still see Blue swirls in the black,” I take a slight step back after letting her stare so deeply into my eyes, “I apologize. I was just interested in seeing them up close.”

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When the author gave a shittier explanation lmao. Thanks! I’ll take a look at it

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Hey everyone! How are all of you? I am pretty decent had a hard time getting this done because have been having continuous blackouts for a couple of weeks that just passed. Love it!

The chapter is fully done - featuring… well… Hayden.

Hope you enjoy her company for this one :smiley:

Did fix some of the wording and things linking the wrong way round.

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A bit of an update - I am currently in the middle of my exams and won’t be paying any attention to COG for the moment and will have an update ready somewhere around next month. So far I made solid progress with what I have but just going to take it easy with it till my exams are done.

See you then!

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Stay safe outta there! :rose:

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Thank you!

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Just read this wip and it look good so far, minus some coding and grammar errors here and there, but other than that, this is an interesting premise and I would love to see more of this. Oh and btw the discord link expired, can you update it author?

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should bother to read his last post:

He’ll probably update the link when he come back, somewhere next month.

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Okay this took forever mixed in with all the other responsibilities in life. I just really wish they would let me just write forever and never have to worry about literally anything else.

Anyway! Chapter eight is here, I can’t comment on the length because it probably just feels so much longer due to it taking this long to get it out.

Sorry about that :slight_smile:

This chapter? Eris. Werewolves. A little bit of Rin and Hayden tossed in there. But still mostly Eris. I have added exactly 4 more skill’s and passive abilities but it will not show up on the stat screen just yet because the next chapter is going to be me changing a lot of the little things.

More stats to level! Yay!

Also a little bit of politics? Who doesn’t love that?

With a closer look at the critters, we might be facing going forward.

Right now I am busy trying to get banners and art done for Corruptant so I should have something nice to look at at some point. The discord is going to go through some work because I just kind of made it and it left it at that.

As for coding issues - please tell me what isn’t working because my tests are showing that I haven’t messed up anything yet.

As for the Grammer - If there is a grammar rule I am consistently breaking please tell me what it is, English isn’t my native language and I am pretty much teaching myself as I move forward.

New discord link - Corruptant - Shattered Mind

I feel like there is something I am missing but honestly, I am just happy I managed to get this chapter out. Feel free to share your gripes and suggestions with me!

But I seriously do hope you all enjoy this chapter :smiley:

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welcome back!

isn’t that the dream of everyone? :sweat_smile:

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Yeah if only I could :unamused:

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Never say never, make this a blockbuster…and you can retire rich and early! :grin:

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Gotta put the work in then!

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