Hi! I think this will probably sound rude no matter how I phrase it, but did you use AI to help you write portions of this story? Because reading through the cuboids, and mashed potato hands, and wood being covered in caramel sauce to list just a few, it was giving off alarm bells.
I was trying to figure out if it was meant to be written in an intensely food-focused way that maybe went over my head, but then there would just be fragments that seemed unaccounted for, like:
You grip the cup harder. “(Unintelligible).”
Again, I’m not sure if that went over my head but it seemed out of place. I don’t want to unfairly accuse anyone so I wanted to ask you directly, but realised there was no subtle/nice way to ask if someone is using AI to help in their content creation, without crediting/acknowledging the AI involvement 