College Tennis: Origin Story (WIP) - Updated 8 Jun '25 [968k words]

I noticed that while playing truth or dare during the party, if you pick Sam this line appears.

For a brief moment, you entertain the notion of what it would be like to kiss Sam, for real - and whether he’d ever wondered the same things. A beat passes, before you shake those thoughts from your brain.

However, at this point my character had already kissed Sam before leaving. Seems like a bug?

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If I may suggest something, when starting the game you choose the genders of RO’s - the descriptions are not very helpful, I had to cross-reference it with the RO list to know who’s being spoken about. Perhaps you could change it to a choice between deciding now or deciding when meeting them or at least you could use their names :slight_smile:

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I got to the scene when I meet GenevievƩ and got trapped in Izanami

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Holy wow, I love this game. :smiley: As someone that actually plays tennis a bit (though not at that level by any means) it’s really really fun to play as if it were me in the game. And dangit, the various characters and humor are all super endearing~, something about the story really clicks with me. :smiley: I enjoy developing my tennis style, and I know I’m going to be anguishing between Sam and Genevieve as favored RO. Wish I could go both- don’t know if that’ll be possible or not, will love it either way. There’s an intangible funness to this game, maybe it’s a personal opinion thing, but I enjoy it on a level that makes me personally happy the same way a good slice of life anime can. :slight_smile: Keep it up! I’ll be bouncing up and down at the service line waiting to be served more story. :stuck_out_tongue:

On a separate matter- you know how you’re undecided on whether to add images for the characters or not? How about making it an optional choice for the player at the beginning of the game? Have the images show up in the team roster/relationships tabs in the stats page if the player opts for them to be shown. Personally, I think it adds something, but I understand the wisdom in keeping it available to not display them.

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@mango_pirate Ah! Yes, I might allow the player to choose G and Sam’s genders when meeting them; If so, this should be up by the next update! Thanks for the suggestion :slight_smile:

@TheBlackOtaku HAHAHA wait what’s izanami?? you get stuck in some sort of state between creation and death? an error screen? if so, would be super helpful if you could let me know whether you’re meeting G via the Thalia (music), Mike (truth or dare), or Emerson (beer pong) routes, so I can double-check the code!

@Shawn_Patrick_Reed AWW gosh, this is such a nice comment, I may or may not have read it a couple of times. I’m so glad the story clicked with ya, and that it’s brought a lil bit of joy! Thank you so much for leaving this message, and hahaah it’s great to know you’re torn between Sam and G! I feel usually it’s the Rayyan fans who also end up liking G.

I have no plans to make a poly route for now, but if I do, you’ll be the first one to know :wink:

Ooh, this is a cool idea! Love it! Currently, though, I’m not sure whether I’d want the images to be more illustrated, or more realistic - especially if it ends up being part of the full game. By the way, I wonder if everyone knows what the copyright rules are for the images generated through ArtBreeder? :thinking:

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As I start on Chapter 2, thought it’d be fun to set up a poll!

Feel free to elaborate for the skills/playing style portion, as I realise I won’t really be able to tell which pairings are being used (unless I set out a whole bunch of options, and I’m lazy).

  • I’m in this mostly for the tennis
  • I’m in this mostly for the slice of life college scenes and overall story
  • I’m in this mostly for the romance

0 voters

Favorite RO so far

  • Rayyan
  • Tobin
  • Sam
  • Guillaume/Genevieve

0 voters

Tennis matches

  • I like the current ratio of ~1 long/intense match per chapter (and maybe 1 short one)
  • I’d prefer >1 long/intense match per chapter
  • I’d prefer <1 long/intense match per chapter (i.e. the match can be shortened)

0 voters

Romance

  • I like the current amount of romance/I feel like I can opt out if I want to
  • I’d enjoy more romance
  • I’d prefer less romance

0 voters

Slice of life/Platonic

  • I like the current amount of platonic/slice of life scenes (e.g. with teammates, hallmates, father)
  • I’d enjoy more platonic hang-outs
  • I’d prefer less platonic hang-outs

0 voters

Top 2 skills/Playing style

  • Strength
  • Finesse
  • Tactics
  • Agility
  • Serves-and-volleys

0 voters

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Can’t decide between Sam and Genevieve :weary: Both are so good

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Whilst I’m not surprised that tennis isn’t the favorite option, I want to say that this game actually made me care about tennis. Before reading, I half expected to be skipping most of it but that didn’t end up being the case. Your love for the game really comes through and becomes infectious. Had a lot of fun with the match against Emerson and I can’t wait for more of them!

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@burninglights I’m not 100% certain but if you create them yourself it should be okay but might want to check around to be sure.

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@Akky42 Ah! This is so, so good to hear. I’m glad the tennis scenes are also appealing(ish) to folk who come in with no huge interest in the sport! Stay tuned for… a match against Jacks and… a doubles match (both of which might determine who your doubles partner will be!)

And yes - I’m not surprised it wasn’t the favorite option either :joy:

@Big_fan1231 HAHA. A good problem to have :stuck_out_tongue: Until… you have to decide. Heh.

@Valixon Ooh thanks for the answer! Yeah, I wonder if it’s considered ā€˜creating them myself’ if it’s through messing around with the other base-faces and mixing 'em with other faces and tweaking some attributes. Seems sketch.

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New update?

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Haha, I know right - hard to believe :joy: But yes indeed! Hope you enjoy it!

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Surprised that Sam and Tobin are the least favourite RO’s. Sammy is so cute and I particularly like that we can have the mc only realize that they may be attracted to Sam at the worst time, aka after going to college during the truth or dare game. :grin:

The tennis segments are actually fun too and I say this as someone who cares far more about cute athletes than any sport.

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Yeah! Perhaps in both cases it’s more of a slowburn compared to G and Rayyan - with Sam there’s already a high level of existing comfort and platonic love, and with Tobin it’s just tender/gentle and slow because it’s in Tobin’s nature, I guess. Perhaps also because they’re so well-loved that it’ll take a while for MC to become: special, I guess.

But yes, totally agree that the fun part in Sam’s route is the terrible timing, which leads to repressed feelings.

(On the other hand, G’s overt flirting has a clear deadline, and Rayyan’s obvious early antagonism/reservations will have to be overcome.)

But I think the main factor here might also be that I’ve given G a lot of recent screentime, with Tobin not having a dedicated scene yet.

YAY! Hook u with the cute athletes, make ya grudgingly enjoy the tennis.

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Yep very devious of you. :smiling_imp:

I am very happy that you did give the option to keep the training wheels on…because while my cutie mc obviously knows quite well what he is doing the same doesn’t go for his hapless player and I do need the regular reminders of what everything does tennis-wise. Although I suspect it will become less of an issue in the published end product where it will at least stay in my short term memory for a marathon playthrough. Heck I might even end up actually learning something at this rate. :sweat_smile:

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If it helps, I prefer Sam as a friend.

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Ah, really enjoyed this update! That match with Emerson really had me stressed even though I was just clicking buttons haha. Also loved the truth or dare scene at the party.

Feedback/Questions
  • This is small feedback but in the stats Sam is the only one with ā€œSam_friendshipā€ instead of ā€œSam (Friendship)ā€ like the others

I am little bit confused about this section. It says that things got heated before but I don’t think at any point there was an argument? I did another playthrough where while he’s tying his shoes I smile instead of teasing him, the ā€œespecially since things
had already gotten slightly heated previously.ā€ doesn’t appear. But even when I teased him, the text implied that he took it playfully. Hopefully what I’m trying to say makes sense haha

  • This was during the match, I’m guessing there’s another skill that’s missing before intelligence

  • During the truth or dare scene I chose the flirty text about kissing Sam and got this


    However in my play through Sam and I have already kissed. I was thinking maybe this section could have a check so this part would make more sense if you haven’t kissed yet.

  • Also kinda wanted to see what messages we were sending to Tobin and Rayyan. (Like now I’m curious to know what I implied for Tobin to react like that especially since throughout the game he didn’t seem to mind the flirting)

  • Also wish that if you decided to send a message to them and then met them later that night it’d have been brought up?

  • Lastly I just wish we had insight into what we ended up discussing with them when we met. I feel like it could’ve been a really good time for more friendship or even romance choices?

But yeah this was such a fun update to play. Really loved it! (:

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HAHAH! Aww, the fact that you speak so confidently and casually about the published end product fills me with immense motivation.

@kckolbe Ah yes! I think Sam works very well as a friend, gives you an outside perspective on the outside world beyond Cargill - and serves as an anchor/lifeline back home too.

@HauteOte OMG! This is amazing. You make some awesome points! Thank you so much for taking the time, and I’m glad you enjoyed the update. My responses are below the cut :slight_smile:

Responses

You’re right, the teasing option shouldn’t show up as having been ā€˜heated’. It’s more that Emerson gets annoyed if you teased them about the laces, then pushed-back on their call. I’ll change the phrasing for that part!

Ah yes - charisma or intelligence should allow you to play that option.

Ah yes good catch - I’ve changed that to acknowledge the kiss that you had with Sam before college.

This - and the suggestion below, on having an extended scene w Rayyan and Tobin is a great one, I will work on expanding the options and the dialogue for this :slight_smile: Thank you again!

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Always been more of a soccer/hockey/martial arts/basketball type of guy, Myself, but the detailed ways in which the tennis matches are described… Well… I have no fucking words. And as a graduating college senior, I love how the interactions with dorm mates and our friends are proceeding so far, giving me lots of parallels to the crap I went through for the last four years. Not normally a fan of these types of slice of life games but I’m definitely hooked. As for the sense of humor in the snarky comments, damn, does it click. And back to that tennis writing, as someone Who’s visually impaired, the fact that I can mentally picture those scenes in exquisite detail is a testament to how good the writing is and how it’s managed to trigger off all of the senses. Conclusion? Keep up the good work

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I can’t get past the scene where GeneviĆØve is introduced at the party it just keeps repeating

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