Chronicles of Asteros(Dark Fantasy, Adventure, Dark Themes) 1 chapter out!

[BigBear]

I’ve begun work on my book The chronicles of Asteros. In it, you play as young character, doing… with goals to…

Currently it’s I have a rough draft of the first book, and the first chapter is more or less done. I just have to reread it and fix any mistakes. Also the stat part needs work, but for now im focused on the story itself. I plan on updating every couple of weeks, since im working full time it might take a while. Also english is not my first language so please be kind.

There will be some dark themes in this, so read at your own discretion(TW:Blood, Abuse, Assault, Past trauma)

Here is a short description:

What are you willing to do to find your purpose, and to reach it? What would you sacrifice, and when does the cost become too great?

Push beyond everything you ever knew. Chase your fate or dare to change it. Explore the vast and complex kingdom of Asteros, visit sacred places long forgotten, and encounter races both wondrous and dangerous. Grow as a person, and watch those around you change as well.

In a world filled with magic, deadly beasts, and ancient mysteries, can you find where you truly belong? Or will you lose everything including yourself in the attempt? You will not walk this path alone. Forge friendships to last a lifetime, and perhaps even find a love strong enough to endure the harshest trials.

To play the demo, go here: CoGDemos

I would appreciate any feedback but please be kind

AI Disclosure:

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

[wenus]

Hi! I had bug on this page, when I chose “scared” option.

[HarleyQueen]

Same

[Carson_Lindsey]

Picking the option to be Bi also gives an error

[DARKSNAKE]

There’s a lack of she/her in this scene

[kb12]

The choices from the character creation to the pages at the end of it are bugged.

[BigBear]

Thank you all! I will make sure to fix the mistakes you found

And now that I started fixing them, I found a bunch of new ones so it might take some time to fix

[wenus]

it’s okay haha, so far i really like it your writing style is very nice

[GoGo442]

[Ercole]

Hello, when MC encountered Chimera, all three options were incorrect. Although I couldn’t continue playing, I am still looking forward to the future.