@AAO You might want to reopen it, because I know not how to. All I know is, he wanted to keep it open.
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Fun fact… I completely forgot to bring my laptop. I got my documents and everything… but I bloody laptop was still at home chillin on my desk 
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But there’s already a winner, right? Why would he want to keep it open?
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Well there’s been 2 winners (Not including my co-author) however, there’s still 1 more slots left!
I completely forgot that more than 1 person can win. So if you’re reading this after I sent you a message saying the contest is now closed. If you wish, you can send me another guess! 
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I would post it here but its not forum friendly…
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I really like this story! I intend to make my MC a thorough villain that mostly did crime for fun, yet still careful not to slip (it certainly didn’t work too well because she still got caught by the FBI). I too like Gabriel the most 
because I think he is the most interesting character here. And he bake 
I noticed an error where Allen was killed in convenience store robbing yet MC still think how he’s doing after they accepted Archangel job, even though they see him dead right in front of their eyes. Also i kinda get a feeling of derailment(?) because of the double full stops at the end of the sentences.
Good luck for your trip!
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Actually, those are one of the reasons why I like him too
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Thank you! I did intend Gabriel to be a main focus, but the game was supposed to be an ensemble of interesting characters… at least, that was the plan
Fun fact: He learned baking from a female Syrian sniper, who in turn, he taught her how to snipe. And she is now (In the canon world) the deadliest mother in Syria.
Found and fixed!
I know, I know… It’s a really bad habit of mine 
I usually read the narrations in my mind… and whenever there’s a pause(usually for a dramatic effect…), I add ellipsis to the text.
I try to limit it as best I can…
This reminds me… I should learn how to bake. 
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I can teach ypu how to bake, i used to bake a lot back in my highschool days 
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Shit. A payday-esque choice game? Take mah muney now.
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this is why i choose my profession.
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Really? Awesome! I had a friend once, he was always rather when it comes to people telling him that baking is for girls, but I can tell you, he makes a mean cheesy puff pastry. Awesome guy.
Glad to know people are still discovering this game I honestly thought this game has gone so far past it’s due date, not a lot of people have taken interest in it anymore…
Are you… a baker? 
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currently taking culinary and baking… i heard its appealing to women
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It is… Look how popular Gabriel is with his mad baking skills.
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Gabriel has a literal sweet spot for Vanilla. He loves to make anything from Vanilla, and he always makes the best creation from Vanilla. I too, love, vanilla…
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that was my motive from the start
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I honestly just wanted to learn how to bake, since Gabriel knows how to bake, I should to.
That, and I love vanilla… God I need some vanilla right now. I need em bad…
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Chocolate is better.
Come at me, bro.
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well baking is easy just don’t mess up the measurements and it will come off the way you want it
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Btw found a few text bugs around the parts with the prison escape. When describing the number of police officers while sneaking a peek from the corner, it repeated the text twice.
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So … do have a chapter 3 release coming soon or what ?
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The complete game will have 6 chapters, not including prologues and epilogues.
However, the current development is still at Chapter 3.
But, that’s only available for the Private Testers The public testing link will only have Chapter 1 and Chapter 2
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