A question about the cruelty of the MC’s family clan, what happens if relatives of the MC are born with congenital diseases? (Such as mental disorders like Katherine and Nerissa Bowes-Lyon or physical illnesses, like Alexei Nikolaevich, Tsarevich of Russia’s Hemophilia)
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In all cases, the relatives and parents of such heirs would try to find ways to get the heir cured, if this did not work, it would get complicated. in the case of a child diagnosed like Katherine and Nerissa Bowes-Lyon, the heir would be deprived of the right to inheritance and the parents would have to have other children, but these children with such a diagnosis would not be killed, but instead would go to some military camp and be forced to train and fight in some war or something, And if they died, at least they died in some war or battle, (in their view this was a very positive point) and stories would be invented about how they overcame such difficulties and such, and whoever said that these heirs were not warriors, would be killed for treason and worse. Reputation is very important for the mc’s family.
In the case of Alexei and hemophilia, these heirs would be obliged to study very, very hard about strategy and everything else that involves knowledge, since they would not be able to fight or train because of their condition. And if they could not live up to their parents’ expectations and failed, both in this and in not being able to have children, they would probably be killed. After all, in their minds a member of their blood who cannot overcome his “weaknesses” is not a sign of having their last name or even staying alive.
In other cases of other diseases and diagnoses,It is the same as these previous ones, if the heirs who had such things could not overcome such “weaknesses”, they might end up being killed or even forced to fight in battles, even if they don’t know how to fight exactly.
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I had to do a big double take when I saw adopt a creature because at first, my brain read it as get adopted by a creature… 
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It’s understandable 
it happens to me too ,sometimes I read too fast and such.
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found an error when I tried to open Characters…
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Are you sure about this? Here it is working normally. Maybe try refreshing the page? Or maybe it is the save.
So i take it that MC and Hayden would be the alternate version of Romeo and Juliet where both Noble Houses despise and hate each other’s guts?
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Try it now, I have updated the file now
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Not exactly? I mean, I didn’t think that way when I was writing, I wasn’t thinking about Romeo or Juliet, but even when I stopped to think about it, it makes sense the similarities, the hate part of the two houses and Hayden and the MC being together, it’s, almost like that. But not with a tragic end like romeo and juliet. Of course, the ending of book one and the relationship between mc and the other characters will depend on you (mc).
Yes, i mean the similarities minus the tragic ending part. Imagine the gossip when MC and Hayden ended up together.
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No doubt about it 
and depending on which one you choose, there will be a lot of gossip, but definitely Hayden and mc will give even more to talk about.
I haven’t read in a while so sorry if it’s already know but is close combat fist or weapons @L.D.nunes
I’m a little confused by your question, is it about whether it’s hand-to-hand combat or with weapons ? Because if this is the question, the answer is that it is hand-to-hand combat.
@L.D.nunes thats exactly what I meant
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It may have been a bit confusing because of the translation in the chapter, sorry if this was the case.
I haven’t read in a while but when I did I was confused abt it @L.D.nunes
MC being the typical ice cold tsundere towards Hayden. LMFAO
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Hello! Just warning here This is the last week to vote,so if you haven’t voted,please do so. And about the new chapters of this wip,I thought seriously about rewriting chapter 1,not totally but definitely bringing new things,including some scenes that I didn’t add,such as one with Hayden,Cecilia and Tyler when mc is still young and one day at the academy. It will be up to you to decide if you think it would be a good idea or leave it as it is, continuing the next chapters without major changes at the beginning. I’m also thinking of adding a fifth ro, but this one wouldn’t be from Petrus… Actually, it’s already planned to appear, where you will be able to meet such ro well in advance if you go on a certain route in the next update.
I haven’t given up on the wip, I thought about it but I won’t because I think there are still some people who like it and enjoy it, so the wip continues. The grammar mistakes in the first chapter will be corrected, or at least I will try to correct them. Anyway, that was it, thanks for your attention, I’ll be back soon with news.
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I’m fine with it so I’ll wait better to start early than a complete overhaul halfway in the game. And now I’m curious who’s the 5th RO although I’m already firmly on Hayden camp.
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