No problem 
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Hey. Question:
Iâm having trouble, going part this page, is it because itâs the end of the demo??
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Yes and no, this is the end of the demo but I just realized that there is a mistake in this scene at the end, but it has already been fixed. You can try again and it will work normally.
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This update will not be as big as I had intended, but here we go.
Added scenes.
-Cecilia, Hayden and Caioâs routes completion.
-Scenes with Eleazar / Commander.
-Brief introduction of scene with your creature.
Part 1 of chapter 2 is 10,000 words long. Total demo 58,000 words, including code.
Scenes should be added soon.
-Scenes with Elia and Tyler.
-Scenes with your creature.
-Scenes exploring the academy.
-Scenes training and with other characters.
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Tried to check the new update but it still ended on the part where you comfort Hayden, have you added it in yet??
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Scene error, sorry. You can try again and it will skip to chapter 2 now.
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I love the story, it has great promise but itâs very obvious that English is not your first language. Iâd advise working with a native English speaker, either as a co-writer, or as an editor. At present the errors are numerous and can be very confusing at times. They seriously detract from the story which, as I said, seems really good. I wish you all the best, whatever you decide. I will continue to follow your progress as I love the story and the world youâve created. 
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First of all, I apologize for such mistakes. I used a google translator in the first chapters and in several texts, this is because I donât know totally the English, I know the basics. I am using another translator now and I am not sure if it is better, it is deepl, which I heard is better. I used it more in this second chapter, but I intend to review the first one and try to fix the translation errors, since the Google translator app often changes words and in the wrong way. Many times I noticed it myself in some moments and others also warned me. I have two betas helping me, but the first chapter I will still take a look and redo the translations, at least to see if itâs better. And second : Thank you very much and Iâm glad youâre enjoying it, I hope the translation will give a little improvement with this app (deepl) in the next chapters, but weâll see.
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@L.D.nunes found this:
choicescript_stats line 74: invalid line; this line should start with âpercentâ, âtextâ, or âopposed_pairâ
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Has been correctedâ:grin:
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Found another one:
choicescript_stats line 74: invalid indent, expected 3, was 2
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Now it has been fixed, I tested it and it is already working normally.
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Nooo! Cliffhanger! 
I was waiting for the father to tell me who the candidates were.
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I know 
it is terrible to be in suspense, but soon you will all find out, and then you can enjoy the new chapter and possibilities, soon
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Hope itâs Hayden cause theyâre the only one I like tbh.
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Well, then I think you will be happy to know that yes, no doubt they will be one of the options for fake relationshipâ:grin:
at the moment the most being voted always has Hayden, then they are already confirmed, you can see a small excerpt of how it will be, this on tumblr game if you want to take a look.
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It makes me happy to know Hayden is one, but it seems a little contradictory. MCâs father refuses to ask for help from the king. The king is Haydenâs father, right? Iâm not sure that works within the scope of characterization. 
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I understand, and I gave a short explanation of it on tumblr as well.To explain this ,itâs quite simple ,mcâs father in fact wonât accept ,he doesnât want help from the king anyway ,he really hates the elkar. But the mc (you) can still choose Hayden afterwards and go against his fatherâs objection, and yes ,this can have some very complicated results in the sense that many will talk about it and etc, I wonât give too much spoiler ,but letâs say that Eleazar obviously wonât be very excited to find out afterwards ,much less the kingâŚ
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Ah, so a little slice of âforbidden romanceâ cake. Nice! 
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Like this, basicallyâ:smile:
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