Before the Incident [July 2026 Update, 414K Words] [Action, Urban Fantasy, Tragedy, Shounen, Revenge] [WIP]

Thank you for the kind words! I’m happy that you enjoyed the story, it’s always nice to hear that people love AA despite their short time! As for the request for a more obssessive revenge path, I’ll consider it, since I feel like it requires a decent amount of branching due to its overall effects on the narrative. As always, thank you for reading :smiley:

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A more obsessive Revanche path Dose Sound lovely also I did read my lazy ass throu the coments and you coud Ib atleast make into a Yandere Type One sidest? Or is it love interst I think it coud be fun ib Only Wishing to be mcs only love meanwihle Mc only wishing to slauther Ib for what She did to AA the Face to Face metting with the two is goning to be awsome

Ib: I actually did this becaus I Like you

Mc: Well then I Hope you Like it to be Killd by me

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There will be a certain path, and depending on how reader’s interpret you could consider it an “obsessive path.” That’s all I say for now :slight_smile:

6/30/2026 Update is OUT!

Updates include:

Relax with your teammates
Take an exam
Reminisce on your adventures
Learn more about the MC
Torture Ib or have an incredible dream (?)
Meet new characters suggested by readers like you!
Hang out with Syo
Hang out with AB
Hang out with H
Tenth's hangout is still in development, will be there in the next update!

The update itself is a whopping 74k words! Making BTI around 414k words!

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That dream/simulation scene GAGGED me!:exploding_head: :exploding_head:

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Is the MC meant to have a preset personality? I have a high reserved stat yet my character acts really outgoing and goofy.

The Update was absolutely AWESOME! I really liked it every secone of it! And such a large update! Im trying to go through these scenes again and again to find hidden scenes and Romance parts. Yes the Romance is pretty interesting as well as suprises like the Dream about ANNA. My favourite ROs at this moment are Belle, Anna and Ib (dont judge me)

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Bro is not ayanokoji

Also helen is so the 12th apostle

And rip my boy abel keep working you ll get there one day

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I felt arbiter was really unique and has a more subtle power.

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Unreal, craving for more tenth content!!

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Syo clasps his hands together. “We’ll eat lunch and then prepare to leave in the evening. You’re about to experience your first mission**(,)** rookie. I hope you’re ready for it.”

Little grammatical error without a coma before rookie

“I see…Have you killed a person before**(,)** Tenth?” She sounds like she speaks from experience.

Another grammatical mistake.

"…You don’t want to be friends with me**(,)** Steve.

I am beginning to see a pattern here.

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I think there is an error with Abel/Belle, sometimes ‘she’ is referred as ‘boy’ or ‘his’, but maybe i need to make a rerun…

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It’s a semi-preset personality for the MC. Stats are still are in a work in progress and might be reworked once the core story is over, so sometimes changes aren’t projected properly.

Happy to see additional AB enjoyers! And yes, the dream sequence was fun to add :smiley:

AB will get there one day, also love the Ayanokoji memes haha

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