Before the Incident [5/3/2025 Mini-Update] [230k words] [Revenge, Superpower, Urban Fantasy] [WIP]

@TheronWinter Making Ib switch sides would change a lot of the story. At that point, the story would shift dramatically. It’d be an interesting topic to write about, but I do want to flesh out the core story before I branch off into these possibilities. Also, I am happy that you mentioned Hector/Helen’s question because it would definitely be interesting to explore that idea if someone so heinous can change for the better.

Exploring Ib in that manner would be interesting, if there’s enough interest/success to the story, I wouldn’t be opposed to adding free new content of this path. I did brainstorm a tidbit of the story near the end where a possible romance between the two could bloom. One of the alternative endings could explore some of it!

I never expected for Ib to receive a decent amount of popularity, but it’s good to know that they have fans!

@Alvin_Chi1 Glad to hear that you’re a fan of Belle/Abel, I was wondering if they were a bit too impulsive/feisty for reader’s liking, but it’s good to know that people enjoy that!

@icyLucy @Gapaot Thank you for reporting these bugs, they will be fixed in the next update! Gapaot, I shall make a guide in a follow up comment :smiley:

@Tolu Thank you for the kind words, I’m glad that you enjoyed the story! Are there any characters that you particularly like? :eyes:

@Bahamuht That idea will be explored in the future! For now, let’s just say it’s really difficult to trick yourself because if there’s even a tiny ounce of you that knows you’re lying to yourself, it won’t work :mag_right:

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@Gapaot

At the end of the prologue, you can unlock one of three Contracts:

  • Wanderer :dagger:
  • Painter :art:
  • Arbiter :balance_scale:

Selecting your favorite drink

  • Hot Black Coffee [+5 :balance_scale:]
  • Protein Deluxe Shake [+5🗡️]
  • Matcha Milk Tea [+5🎨]

Selecting your ambition

  • Art [+21🎨]
  • Sports [+21🗡️]
  • Law School [+21 :balance_scale:]

Choosing ice skating style

  • Loved to go fast [+10🗡️]
  • Loved to do fancy tricks [+10🎨]
  • Chatted casually while skating [+10 :balance_scale:]

Choosing how you want to skate with Anna/Apollo

  • Commit to an energetic dance [+10🗡️]
  • Commit to an elegant dance [+10🎨]
  • Commit to a casual dance to chat [+10 :balance_scale:]

Choosing an activity at the library

  • Paint a portrait of Anna/Apollo [+15🎨]
  • Read comics [+15🗡️]
  • Read non-fiction [+15 :balance_scale:]

Choosing a game to play with Anna/Apollo in your memory

  • Innocent Cog Endeavor [Fighting Game] [+10🗡️]
  • DougCraft [Creative Builder Game] [+10🎨]
  • Great Lawyer [Visual Puzzle Novel] [+10 :balance_scale:]

Hopefully this helps you get the Contract you want!

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You won’t believe it
Apparently I had 36 on Wanderer (Sports + comics)
and 35 on Arbiter (VN + dance to chat + chat casually + hot coffee)

like what in the hell, lmao

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That is so unlucky :frowning_with_open_mouth: And incredibly impressive to cut it that close. Well, I hope you have fun with the gaslighting Contract, it’s probably one of the more fun Contract’s to write :rofl:

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i want this book to be finished its quite addicting and the power system is pretty nice.

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Thank you! I hope to finish this book within the next year or so, fingers crossed! :crossed_fingers:

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Just to make you aware, Dashingdon hosting will be closing soon so I would recommend moving this to cogdemos or uploading a compiled html file:

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This wip was amazing i love the idea my character is just running around with a revolver red dead redemption style

Revenge is a fool game and im looking to play :joy:

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Hi Everyone,

Apologies for my absence and silence, lots of life things as per usual. I have added chapters 6,7, and 8 to the story. There are still aspects I need to still add to the story, but I got impatient (Plus I felt it fitting to upload an update on Valentine’s Day). Turns out I prefer to update the story in smaller chunks than churning out massive updates. This update is about 82k words. I’ll gradually add more QOL parts for the demo and the extra stuff, but my main goal was getting the bare bones of Act 2 done.

Main things I’m looking for is any major game breaking bugs.

With that, I wish you all a happy Valentine’s Day, why not spend it with Anna/Apollo! :heart:

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Can someone make a brief description on how the powers are like?

Hello,

In the main post, there is a tab that shows “Powers (MAJOR SPOILERS)” that you can click on :scroll:

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Happy Valentines Day, @Terrorcrest and thank you so much for the update :heart:

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@Queen_Zelda No problem! I felt it appropriate to upload the update today, although I’m already finding some typos and bugs :rofl: I will have to fix those and roll out another update soon. I’m hesitant to update it right now since I don’t want to interrupt some readers’ playthroughs!

Also I would love to hear people’s thoughts on the new chapter!

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You really had to end it there like that ?

Arbiter looks the weakest at first but looks like it has the strongest potential.

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wow that 3-4 chapters updated… but the cliffhanger though

with a lot of flashbacks

i wonder if the dead ro will turn up again at some point ?

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@Khotun Unfortunately, I really wanted to upload the update, I had to leave it on a cliffhanger :eyes: As for Arbiter’s power, I would say it has the strongest potential, but also one of the hardest powers to write as well. I am excited to reveal the power up the MC will receive later on in the story!

Yeah, I was surprised despite how much I wrote, there was still a cliffhanger at the update! And yes, the flashbacks will keep coming in future updates!

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I can tell the Arbiter is one of the hardest to write l. Very difficult I can imagine , the other two are pretty straightforward

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Late Anniversary Survey

Hello everyone, I know it’s a bit late, but I’d like to celebrate Before the Incident’s anniversary with a couple of fun polls. It’d also be helpful for me to gauge audience feelings towards certain characters!

Favorite Character of All Time (Will get a bonus scene added for the winner)
  • Main Character
  • Anna/Apollo
  • Syo
  • Tenth
  • Abel/Belle
  • Hector/Helen
  • Tanya
  • Ib
  • Cytherea
  • Flint
  • Faust
  • Axel
  • Mayor Okli
  • Dave
  • Sasha
  • Xiao
  • Clint
  • Maggie
  • Pilo
  • Kati
  • Glyp
0 voters
Best Romance Option
  • Anna/Apollo
  • Syo
  • Tenth
  • Abel/Belle
  • Hector/Helen
0 voters
Best Character Platonic-Wise
  • Anna/Apollo
  • Syo
  • Tenth
  • Abel/Belle
  • Hector/Helen
0 voters
Best Apostle Member
  • Ib
  • Cytherea
  • Flint
  • Faust
0 voters
Favorite Contract/Power
  • Wanderer
  • Painter
  • Arbiter
0 voters
Top Character for MC to have a one night stand with (Max 3 choices)
  • Syo
  • Tenth
  • Abel/Belle
  • Hector/Helen
  • Ib
  • Cytherea
  • Flint
  • Faust
  • Xiao
  • Axel
  • Pilo
  • Kati
  • Glyp
0 voters
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Think I found some bugs. These passages seemed like they shouldn’t be appearing together.

Chapter 4:


Chapter 5:

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Thank you! I found out that I needed to have an elseif statement instead of an if statement, this fix will be included in the next update, I appreciate you sending this :grin:

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