Azrael: Chapter 1 (WIP) {48K Words. Action/Thriller/Crime/Superhero} (Updated - 26/08/24)

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How author write the Disclaimer part already make me interested in this story.

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Will try me best to keep you hooked on the story.

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Would you guess prefer

  • Long but time taking WIP updates
  • Short but Regular Updates
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take your time a wip is always a marthon not a run :slight_smile:

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So i want the violence in the story to be quite visceral. Any suggestions for literature or media that i can go through to be better?.

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Go watch the boys my friend

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I’ve been watching that show since it’s inception and i must say they put on some of the most horrendous shit on screen (it’s a compliment). But in the newer seasons it’s more about sexual degeneracy rather than pure violence. I do love seeing people getting blowen up like balloons and torn in half.

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If you like anime I would recommend the Hellsing OVA or the Hellsing manga, it’s an amazing show/book series with lots and lots of blood and gore :laughing:
And it has humour and good looking characters :heart:

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Thanks for the suggestions. I’ve always admired anime or manga but never found myself too deep in them. Although Attack on titan and Death note are some of my favourite series ever and Berserk (manga) is one of the best work of literature I’ve ever read.

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if you want something with gore and nice fights you could watch the anime Blood C but takes a bit time till the fights starts

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Thanks for the suggestion.

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or future diary yuno is crazy^^

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Have you ever read the Demonata by Darren Shan? Its pretty gory.

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Black bullet seems fitting the story

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Sure I’ll check it out.

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Try Warhammer 40K

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So the demo end when MC go eat? Just wanted to make sure because it’s forever loading in this scene.

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Yes it ended there. I’ll try to fix the problem in the next Update.

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New Update of around 25k words coming in 2 or 3 days.

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Really like the premise of the story and it’s already a bit interesting but it seems to not have enough choices and every page break says next chapter (not sure if it’s a coding issue or not.). Other than that it’s not bad. :+1:t3:

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