Azrael: Chapter 1 (WIP) {175K Words. Action/Superhero} (Updated - 07/09/25)

80k Total words written so far. might end up at 85k words in the upcoming update.

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There is a video game call ready or not, its basically a police swat game and the game is very dark and very depressing. You dont need to play the game just watch the lore explanation on youtube from a channel call “shayne, please shut up” and "shayne, no one cares. You might actually enjoy it

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Thank you. I’ll check it out.

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I won’t describe Azrael as ‘extremely friendly’ but more like socially inept and awkward friendly.

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sneek peek

Next update sneak peek.

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Let him Cook :fire:

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Lore updated on Tumblr.

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84k words written so far. The next update should be available in a few days. Do you all have any questions regarding the story or the lore?. Also ideas and suggestions will be appreciated

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Will we see more of river???

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While I can’t reveal too much right now but River is the most important person in Azrael’s life who pulled them out of the darkness even enough it was for a short while. This might sound cheesy but I almost cried outlining a scene that involved River. .

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She’s literally azrael casca,she fixed him

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Can we choose our primary fighting styles ??

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I’ll probably have to stick a certain lore that involves their upbringing but Azrael’s fighting style is comprised of Pro-wrestling moves, Muay Thai, Taekwondo, Boxing, Judo, Kung-fu, BJJ and Krav Maga.

Yeah so basically Azrael’s combat style is like a mix of Batman and John Wick.

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I love a great story like this one and I cry everytime I read rivers scene

I dont have questions keep up the wonderful work

I wonder what happened to river and how did they meet i wonder a lot sometimes if it comes to my mind ^^

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What kind of equipment will we be using? And will they be specific for a fighting style?

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Can we maybe use a bow and arrow like green arrow as our own vigilante style??

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As off now I’ve planned a grapple gun, makeshift EMPS, smoke grenades, a single shot hand-cannon, crossbow, Hand guns, daggers, Ninja Stars and an Assault Rifle.

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While not exactly a bow and arrow, I am planning to include a crossbow.

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Why not visiting Fixer like John wick? Ain’t our MC is somewhat professional on the job.

Like “May I recommend this grenade, for crowd control? M 67 fragmentation grenade, we offer discount for bulk buy”

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The reason why we ain’t visiting fixer from John Wick because Azrael is thought to be dead during the Nakamura Massacre. They want to keep it that way. It’s also to depict their resourcefulness by using makeshift gadgets.

Though it’s only the beginning, so we may visit in the future as the vigilante. Plus what’s stopping us from getting help from an awkward but genius intellect engineer (I may have revealed too much :sweat_smile:)

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