An Unnamed Book WIP


#1

I’m new to this and I would really like your guys’ opinions and constructive criticism.

Here is a link to the first chapter…


#2

Hi, and welcome. :slight_smile:

Could you please give us more details about what kind of story it is, and what does the file contain?

I admit that I don’t like downloading something I don’t know anything about…


#3

Oh yes! My bad. I was in a rush to get this up. The basic plot us that there are scientists who are experimenting on people. I can’t reveal much that isn’t in the first chapter. I’m not good at keeping my mouth shut when it comes to spoilers.
But yeah, the download link contains the the first chapter. It’s in an HTML format, because my rough draft is being written through Twine.
But to say what the thing is about… umm… there’s magic and a a sort of sci-fi mixed with fantasy I guess.


#4

I have it planned out so I know what is going to happen, but yet, I don’t really know what is going on or what it’s about.
I don’t even have a name for it yet, evidently.


#5

I would recommend mega.nz over mediafire for downloads. Easier to download and fully encrypted before they see your files.