All Those Withering Lilies — 14/07/2025, 10k words, WIP [inspired by puella magi madoka magica]

DEMO (10k)
last updated → 14/07/2025

All Those Withering Lilies is an interactive fiction story inspired by puella magi madoka magica, neon genesis evangelion and 2000s magical girl anime like tokyo mew mew and shugo chara. It follows lilies, children and young adult raised in artificial dream machines, granted powers through a desperate wish, and tasked with suturing invisible wounds across the world. Sent alone to different cities, they fight magic no one remembers and live lives no one sees.

This is a story about manufactured purpose, buried memory, and the quiet rebellion of those who were never meant to survive. It explores intimacy, identity, and the slow cost of obedience.


Lilies work alone. They always do.

It has been eleven years since you bloomed. Eleven years of service to humanity. You have closed wounds no one else could see, stitched the world back together in silence. No one has ever thanked you, except maybe your handler, the woman who has given you missions since you were a child.

You are a soldier, a spy, a witch. Something unknown that blends all three.

For eleven years, you have lived in the same city. You move through life with a cover story, a fake family who took you in without knowing what you were. You have colleagues who smile too wide, who try too hard to include you. They do not know why you’re really on this earth.

Lilies work alone. Teams are only created when a single lily is no longer enough.

Yet now, three lilies have been sent to the same small town.

Liseron is quiet, distant, and forgettable. The wounds should not be frequent enough to justify a team. Something is wrong.

You are one of these lilies, and all three of you have entered your eleventh year.

Lilies always wither after twelve.

You have one year left to live. What will you do with it?


FEATURES

  • choose the name you use as a cover, your gender, the type of wish you made, your appearance from the color of your hair to whether you have freckles or piercings!
  • rebel or obey. be a good lily and die quietly or learn the truth behind it all.
  • choose between four romance options, as the famous song goes: “kiss kiss fall in love”!

⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ ROMANCE OPTIONS

RHEA/RAPHAEL (f/m) ⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ if they were a trope, they’d be rivals to lovers.

You weren’t supposed to get along, and you don’t. R is volatile, proud, and impossibly skilled. Every interaction is a contest, every glance a challenge. But when it matters, they’re always by your side, teeth bared and ready to burn the world down. Maybe it’s loyalty. Maybe it’s something messier. Whatever it is, neither of you can stop.

LUNE/LYSANDRE (f/m) ⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ if they were a trope, they’d be tragic devotion.

They are always there. Quiet, steady, careful not to take up space. You have lost count of how many times they stepped in without being asked, how many times they chose your safety over their own. They never ask for anything in return. But sometimes, you catch it. A glance that lingers too long. A silence that stretches into longing.

SERAPHINE/SAMAEL (f/m) ⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ if they were a trope, they’d be forbidden love.

They are not supposed to exist. You were never meant to meet them. And yet you do, again and again. In places no one should be, in dreams that do not belong to you. They speak in riddles, vanish without warning, and pull you closer every time. You know you shouldn’t trust them. You do anyway.

XIAOFAN (f/m) ⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ if they were a trope, they’d be single parent romance.

They have something you were never meant to touch. A home. A child. A reason to live beyond the work. They should keep their distance, and at first they do. But you feel it, the way they soften around you, the way hope creeps back into their voice. They know how dangerous this is. They let you in anyway

⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ ART OF RHEA

RHEA drawn by QIU

⋆౨ৎ˚⟡˖ CHANGELOG

14/07/2025 — the first version of the demo, with the first chapter, is released! I’ve commissioned an artist to draw rhea, lune, samael and male xiaofan, can’t wait for the result hehe

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A good start, can’t wait to see more

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wow this looks incredibly interesting! i played through this first demo and it’s a very interesting concept, i can’t wait to see the continuation of the plot. i feel really bad for the mc and all the lilies

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Awesome story, I really love the interesting mix between spy, magical girl and drama. So intriguing and original. The love interests are very interesting :heart_eyes::orange_heart: bookmarked and if favourited. I’m looking forward to more :heart:

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A Magical girl inspired game? That’s a first.

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And when I become a witch then what?

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I only have surface level knowledge of Madoka Magica (being meguca is suffering) but it’s interesting enough. A bit too short to have much to say about it yet though.
If there’s going to be conflict/fights might want a few stats that could be used/tested for that.

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This is an amazing set-up, and the description for sure is right up my alley. I’m excited to see the game continue to grow as you keep working on it!

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It is definitely interesting and I’m certainly a Madoka fan. I also appreciate that we have a choice of gender for ourselves and the ros. I always wanted a magical boy story. :rofl::+1:

So far, the ros are interesting. I’m already interested in Raphael, but will we have to be agreeable with them to be able to romance them? Cause so far that seems the way to earn relationship points. I was hoping we could butt heads more but still romance them…like a proper rival. Like, sorry Raphael, but I’m not cool will capturing a child?

Anyway, since my wish was Love, I went for the fairy tail prince look with blue eyes and brown hair. Got the theme down. :rofl:

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It’s good to know I wasn’t the only turned off by R for wanting to capture the kid. I’m not gonna force it to end up like us. I guess I’m gonna be rebel against the system seeing how far they will go

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I still want to ro R, but we are gonna struggle relationship point wise considering how much of a negative hit his relationship bar took when I sided more with L in that moment. :sweat_smile: Specially if romance is tied to that bar.

Also, since we know pretty much zero about ‘wild lillies’, it’s hard to judge what my character would do. He has the 11 years of knowledge…not me the reader. Lol

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All we know is they screwed around with our memories, has questionable methods of getting more Lilies and put people in situations to force the wish which eventually kills them. Apart from closing any magic wounds, I can’t think any more good things for now

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If it kills them, and not something else… I won’t say, but my mind goes to Madoka Magica’s big twist.

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Oh so interesting I enjoyed it a lot

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i havent played it yet but i saw madoka and said yessss!

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I definitely get the worry lmao but don’t worry about that! I’m not there yet obviously writing-wise but I’ll make sure you can romance Raphael AND argue with him plenty!!

I don’t think he’s the type to appreciate boot-lickers anyway, in chapter 2, I’ll probably write a scene where he’ll ask you “what the well was that back there, why didn’t you obey and capture the wild lily?”, and there’ll be a choice to stand your ground which when picked makes you gain friendship points

Raphael’s the kind of person to respect strong ideals, even if they’re not the same as his. He’ll act like you’re stupid for it, obviously, but still, he’ll respect you haha

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Sweet. That is exactly what I was hoping for with a rival romance. Lots of headbutting and tension, but respect and attraction as well. Gotta love opposites attracting. :rofl::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::+1:

You could do two bars. One friendship and one romance. This way one can ro someone despite low friendship.

My MC is a bit of a quiet cold fish, but I imagine now as he interacts with the other lillies and remembers more, he’ll start to become more passionate and…alive. I am aiming for that sort of true love fantasy princely theme with him.

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Interesting start, look forward to more!

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Is Lune meant to be nonbinary? In the scene where you meet them, the narrative uses a mix of the pronouns you’ve selected the characters to be (he or she) and they:

I actually always love seeing nonbinary characters, especially ones that are potential ROs! But I wasn’t sure if this was your intent here or not.

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It’s a mistake, but honestly if any of the ROs was to be non-binary, it’d be L haha. Not you actually making me SERIOUSLY think about writing them a storyline where they develop their sense of self and thus come out as non-binary or maybe as a demiboy/demigirl… I’m not non-binary so that would require research on my part but it’d eat I think :thinking::thinking::thinking:

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