Whew, more feedback sent!
I’ve changed the layout, again! Let me know how it works for you!
I’ve sent the promised feedback rework for Chapter 1.
Warning, the report is big.
… Okay, I know I said I would spend less time giving out grammatical suggestions but…
I noticed that several of my suggestions were included in the update!
That means a lot to me, very much so.
If any of you two (Admiral and Captain) don’t mind, I may continue to scrutinize the text for grammatical advice.
But, you’ll have to form a pact with me!
Thing is, by my calculations, completing the game and sending the various “Opinion and Choice” reports will take at least 12 days.
Going back over the text to analyze it will add several more days to this estimate.
If you would be okay with me completing only a single, but detailed playthrough over the span of a few weeks, I would be more than happy to continue supplying grammatical feedback.
It’ll just take some time and effort, but that’s no problem.
Now, if you excuse me, I’m going below deck to take a dirt nap.
G’night, Admiral, Captain!