A Shinobi's Tale(WIP)

I think I know what I’m going for my character she is pretty much what you call a relax spirit she doesn’t have a plan for the future of being a Shinobi or civilian she’s only doing this to help her family she likes the kid who has the spirit trying to become the Sun Lord because to her that kid has more spirit than most the classroom together so she might follow him as his right hand they keep his dream alive

3 Likes

As a Naruto fan and because I played through this a few times I just thought I would ask would being from a clan and having a bloodline jutsu like wood Release, Explosion release or even Ice release, I thought what if when my character learns how to better use wood release wouldn’t he be able to use earth and water Release more naturally?
This was just a thought I had so whatever you think of it is cool with me.

3 Likes

Hi, to answer your question not necessarily, for example hashirama was very well known for his wood release which he also had very good mastery of, but he was hardly ever shown to be very good at water or earth style?

My point? I treat releases as different from normal justu and each require their own dedication to make it better. So having wood style release wouldn’t necessarily mean you are very good at water style although to be very good at wood style you will likely need to also be good at water style if that makes sense

6 Likes

True i forgot about that since it was a Kenkai Genkai (Bloodline related Jutsu), and its been a while since I have watched and seen naruto, and thanks for taking your time to help me out, with this info.

2 Likes

I really have a fun question to ask about the two guys who might have just kidnapped a bunch of children I feel like their goals are more different and more violent they don’t want peace they want a war

2 Likes

The Path of the Martial Arts dev tackling a Dragon Ball game could be amazing. JJK’s doing well with two games already, but I get the hesitation with SCA—stats give that extra depth

1 Like

Talking about releases, it seems to me that each basic release represent a village, and each village is represented by two clans, if i were to infer which is which, i’d say:

Fire → Ember Village → Akuma, Shizen.
Lightning → Sky Village → Senko, Saberu.
Wind → Dune Village → Ogodei, Motoire.
Earth → Obelisk Village → ?, ? → i don’t know, and that makes me sad :frowning:
A mix → MC’s Village → Everything Your Heart Desires.

If so, where’s the wet release? The world is too dry and shriveled already as it is, think about all the thirsty kids in London that would thank you for adding some fictional moistness into their paid internet experience, you would be making the world a better place!

Let’s call it the “Wet Village”, where everything is moist, and most importantly, wet!

…in regards to MC’s character, perhaps you would find it more comfortable to add a stereotype selection at the beginning. Now, why would I suggest that? I would, because it seems the choices already express distinct archetypes, so why not nail them down so we can get to know them better?

1.- The idea would be to, choose a stereotype, and wonder what is it about as you deconstruct it thorough the narrative (cause the mystery of text is that one never know what one is getting into until it gets worded).
2.- Then, in between pages add non-personality-related choices, the kind of choices that only serve to move the plot forward.
3.- The selected stereotype at the beginning would flavor the wording of the plot-moving choices, allowing us to understand what the stereotype meant all along.
4.- The combination of both, results in the most likely outcome which gets worded in the page.
5.- Then, if you feel like something traumatic just happened, you can add a twist or selection of twists to the stereotype, the twist would reflect the character’s mental health.
6.- Eventually, the stereotype, the choices made, and the twist are in service of the character’s sense of well-being, which is rationalized into an ideology “the world works in this way, in exclusion of these other bunch of ways.”
7.- So, each character’s plot is the development of a fixed ideology of sorts.
8.- And the general plot is about a clash between diverse ideologies, some characters serve as the very extreme embodiment of an ideology, while others are more moderate, but the fun is in clearly delineated differences, the more extreme, the better!

This however, you would have to consult with the rest, and with that respectfully alluring brain of yours, the feedback ought to go along with the vision after all! Seriously.

2 Likes

:full_moon_with_face: :full_moon_with_face: :full_moon_with_face: oooo I guess you’ll find out soon enough

2 Likes