A Shinobi's Tale(WIP)

[ghedovic40]

No worries, thank you too for your support

[Ivan_WM]

News that can make a Naruto fanboy cry.

Thanks for the update, haven’t checked it out but I’m already sure it’s gonna be a banger.

[Saf11]

Finally finish trying all the choice on the training, although the demo not going far it still nice the training serve many choices with many monologue. Currently the choice we made still not making any consequences so i can’t really judge about that consequences of aspect but yeah the training sequence is still fun to read. Thank you and stay healthy

[ghedovic40]

Hi About that, We are still in chapter 0, that is the prelude to the res of the story so no life altering choices need to be made yet

[No_body99]

Hi, I really like it so far and I am thrilled for an update…
Keep up the good work and thanks for creating this game

[JoshiYinmith]

Really like the story so far.

In the demo came across some errors.

Test class :

• Narumaki firstly trips over himself in the first obstacle to te cheers and laughter of the group,

• He jumps on one pole and tries to balance himself on it but hsi wobbly legs give way and he lands on his groin against the pole

• there’s a limit to how much your body can take before losing effectiveness, and let tat be a shining example from the rest of you class" Katashi says

• He taps Narumkai’s head as

This is naruto story ooh… sorry its Narumaki ! story
plz change the name of the characters its obvious (maybe its a parodic story …??)

The beginning here talk about chakra and basic element combination (more material here Magic Combinations | Secret RP Wiki | Fandom )

Part form that, maybe refer to the name of the character instead of “I…i…i…i” it will make your storytelling more easy for you and will let the reader learn right away who talk and who move.

Till next time, young padawan.

[Yungeen1]

The story is from naruto so ofc the names would be similar

[Random_Person]

For the part we’re the characters were asked on what they want to be, I think choosing to be a legendary shinobi would be the most interesting path, because what makes a shinobi legendary? For the sun lord one it easy to figure out how one can be the sun lord/lady, but legendary shinobi? Now that is an hard path to follow

[JoshiYinmith]

Just think that the author will spend a least another year working on this story and will want to collect the reward of all that hard work.

He will want to sell the story, i will tell you lawyers love this easy win and specially those bandai namco or the owners at Shueisha Inc.

(if the author read this, plz think just mod your story in sense that those lawyers won’t find anything, writting about shinobi in villages is not copyright for more simple info : link
==> Is Naruto Copyrighted? Everything You Need to Know - GCELT )

[JoshiYinmith]

Some more thoughts on this matter of elements.

That really bug me. The basic elements are always always :

• fire
• water
• earth
• air
• light (rare cuz overpower)
• dark (rare cuz overpower)

This basic elements can be combine to make another elements (progression…mastery…its obvious for storytelling and progression).

Till next time.

[Yungeen1]

Its based off naruto and in naruto there are 5 basic elements……fire,wind,earth,water,lighting

[Favour_Inyang]

But there is also ice and magma and metal if I recall. Ice was a bloodline technique Haku had.Naruto obtained Magma and Metal in the war arc after getting amped. But yeah those are the usual basic ones.

[Valda_Reehux]

since this story is loosely based on naruto, will there be a final showdown against some aliens from somewhere unexplainable? because I really hope not

I hope the story stays within conflict between ninja villages, rising in ranks to be the leader of a ninja village, and developed ourselves into a strong ninja with unique skillsets, and of course friendships and romances

but you’re the author, so its really up to you, I wish you good luck on your WIP

[ghedovic40]

@JoshiYinmith it’s based on Naruto but there are no real Naruto characters in the story. There might be some similarities or references but that’s just fan service😅

Secondly as long as the game doesn’t break when you’re playing I’m satisfied, I’ll work on the grammatical errors later

Also thanks for your link and for the character name reference to know who is talking could you elaborate ?

And I don’t plan sell shinobi tale at any point so rest easy because this is my first game and I’m really not working on it enough to charge for it. It’s a learning experience for me, Maybe by my third game I’ll start to think about that but for now this is just a hobby I enjoy

@Random_Person it would seem you have discovered that many paths lie before you. All that is left is for you to discover your own talent. Is one the sun lord/lady because they are strong or are they strong because they are the sun lord/lady?

@Valda_Reehux just because you said that…hehehe

[JoshiYinmith]

Let say there a lot of ‘i’
like this one : ‘’ i’m hinatsura ‘’

a ton, maybe an erase and see what is like

[ghedovic40]

Hi people, it’s been a while. I took a little break for myself and health but I’ll be back to continue writing and making a shinobi’s tale with a new update

[Getem]

Nice

[Phantom_Knight]

I didn’t expect to see the JJK reference in a Naruto world bruh. Anyways I got a doubt. What’s the difference between agility and speed stat? Aren’t they the same?

[JohnKittz]

Agility is dodging and speed must just mean speed unlike other games where agility is speed are one.

[ghedovic40]

Tbf it’s just that i do make all sorts of references and it just so happens to be a Naruto world​:smirk: