I mean, how dare she pit me against the man I love and got me executed. Oi just you wait when I come back and get what I was owed.
Am I a bad person 
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Eli, yes very excited, hope he’ll not be written as an ass after resurrection.
And absolutely no-no to Leon.
My MC will probably burn her with magic (fire) alive, just like she’s the reason for MC’ bbq.
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If it means anything, I’ve been crying uncontrollably ever since Ilya tried to free me from the prison, but my emotions are pretty much fucked in general because of hormone shit so take that for what you will.
“I love you too.”
That was the last you ever saw of her.
;-;
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I had a feeling author have something in store for her… But yeah her motivation feels kinda weird - what suspicion behavior could MC demonstrate? It kinda feels that she hates us out of the blue.
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AUTHOR YOU ARE AWESOME YOU JUST MADE ME CRY TODAY(i never cried over a damn novel before but when I read your masterpiece, it eradicate my bravado for a while lol) the ending just… Damn… I romance ilya and at the ending where she see the truth that we’re innocent months after we died is just… Damn… It pains me a lot lol… She was there and she must regret it when she can’t convince MC to escape. Poor MC died just like that at the hands of people that they tried to save…
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Paravir scheduled the next update for 15th April, more or less. Please don’t rush the authors 
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Lol most people are thanking you for making them cry @Parivir, that’s an amazingly weird thing. This story had that much effect on people.
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I crossed the line . But i just couldn’t take it anymore and wanted to vent it out:joy:…Ill wait here even if the update comes next year.
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Clearly we need more WIPs where MC is suffering, the audience demands it
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looks like it, though I think it’s the talk with Leon that made most people emotional than MC getting burned alive.
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Yeah @Parivir, this story is, hands down, one of the best stories I’ve read so far. Great job, I’m looking forward to the next update.
Edit: Please PLEASE don’t have the MC need to go to school at ALL. I’m so sick of stories involving schools (cough cough lots of CoGs and Hosteds cough cough)
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I’m sorry / you’re welcome, I think? 
It gets better, I promise. (marginally at least…)
Hi, sorry you feel that way! Ante is a character that’s deliberately designed to be read any number of ways, and certainly her being unfair/too heavily prejudiced towards MC is one of those ways. There aren’t really any grand reveals intended for her as the story progresses–the motivations behind her actions have all been laid out in the story. If you dislike her for it, you will have an in-game opportunity to act on that dislike!
Grateful for your anticipation! I’m aiming for a monthly release schedule, at least, so hopefully the wait won’t be so extreme.
May I recommend The Exile? I’m a sucker for fall-from-grace narratives (as this game will doubtlessly tell you), and that one hits all the buttons for me.
Aha, you’ll be glad to hear that there will be no school arc in this game. MC is fully matured as a spellcaster, and would therefore be an odd fit for an educational institution.
Thanks for taking a chance on the game!
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I’m sensitive about fiction, so basically, if a game DOESN’T make me cry at least ONCE, I consider it a bad game. Yes, not joking.
But rarely games make me cry in early parts of the story. What makes this game so exceptional is that it already did.
Which also guarantees it will be a good game since the me crying part is already checked 
Both, for me. I consider the entire part in the cell AND the execution to be kind of a whole.
I second that SO STRONGLY!
It’s one of my three favorite WIPs - along with this one and The Bastard of Camelot! 
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Eh 
what I meant is a compliment and lol I don’t believe you that it gets better cause it’s not bad or worse to start with.
THAT’S IT. lol I’ll make this choice.
I agree with you on this too.
WoW, It’s rare for me to get emotional and cry biy AMR came close to that though.
I like the final conversation between Illya and MC.
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A Mage Reborn Fangame: Sunblind
Ever wonder what happened to Leon, the week he was not seen?
Over the past couple of days, I worked together with @StarlitOpal to convert her brilliant fic leon is sad into a full fangame for your enjoyment! It is 3200 words long–roughly half the length of the Leaf End arc–and allows you to input your mage’s name, pronouns, and make choices according to their personality.
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WoW @Parivir this Sunblind short is from Leon is Sad fanfic is absolutely crazy, it’s very good.
This is as good as the main story.
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Its an appropriate continuation of the main story. I wish there were something for Ilya mancers too.
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Would you believe it if I said I was actually hoping (or dare I say suspecting) that you’d do something like that, considering how much you liked the fic!
I’m sooo glad I didn’t read it, with it not fitting my MC at ALL.
The first thing I do when checking ANY game, is to look at the stat screen… and oh god I love stat screens that change and “the headstone is empty” is SO dreadful and perfect.
I’m not exactly sure which stats were described with which words on the headstone, and I’m pretty sure I had the same switching issue with the emotional and reserved stat here as in the main game but eeeh, who cares. It’s a short thing, so it’s okay.
Really though, it was gorgeous.
And so sad.
But perfect.
I’m so happy I could actually enjoy it now!
I WILL be thorough and still report bugs though. Bear with me?
Some female pronouns still remain even if male was selected in one specific scene (well, maybe more, but not with the choices I made).
“If an obstacle seemed insurmountable, she would roll up her sleeves and try again in a different way with nary a word of complaint—he had seen her do it with everything from hard-to-remove stains to performing reconnaissance.”
EDIT: oh and also, can it be added to the original post for convenience?
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That is exactly what I’ve wanted from weekday morning, a little bit of pain.
I love how you included hateful options and not just comfort ones.
Can’t wait for an update on a main game, thank you so much for this little piece!
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This WIP, The Exile and I, Forgotten One are the trifecta of Suffered MC.
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