1966 WIP 244k words (UPDATE 1/9/25 +84k words) [Mystery, Dark Romance, Cosmic Horror, Lovecraftian, Supernatural]

huh? that doesn’t happen though?? the ghoul doesn’t kill anyone in this update. do you mean the nameless ‘poet’? that’s not Roulet. Roulet is even the one telling you about this guy “There is a dead poet in your bathroom. ${roulet_name} says he cut himself yesterday after brunch.” And the ghoul has nothing to do with it: the guy did it himself. I think I should rewrite this sentence for clarity…

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Reading comprehension devil strikes again, my bad

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Ghoul is a she in text, is a ‘he’ in reply.

another swapping between genders in one page

I think something is missing here

Edit: I just finished the demo and I’m addicted. How can something this good be true

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Insanely good vibes, I absolutely dig the atmosphere you’ve created with the words here, hope it releases fully because it’s worth it.

I am a hopeful God hiding behind masks who can’t help but be nice to others for some insane reason

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Found an error:

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thank you!!!

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something IS missing! thank you for pointing out! <3

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oooof I actually don’t understand what’s wrong D: I’m guessing it’s the ‘shard’ variable, but how can it be missing at this point? it can’t be ‘none’ right? I added [*if shard = “none” *set shard “marsh”] If anyone knows what’s wrong I’ll be super grateful!

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just came across this WIP and I am enjoying it so far, I am lowkey torn between Roulet and Nyarnyar

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Human woman = yes.

Fish woman = yes.

Ghoul woman = yes.

Eldritch woman I knew earlier = YES.

Dammit they all too good

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Maybe it’s because I used an older save?

As enjoyable as always! I did see some double quotation marks at some points, and when you dance with Nyarlathotep, the option is nod.", instead of just nod. Can’t remember the other ones, I’m afraid!

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