(12/5 UPDATE/REWRITTEN) Agents of Lucifer: Book 1 (WIP)

Finally finished after rereading again from the beginning since it had been a while.

Loved the last chapter and love this whole story!

Did come across one pronoun error in chapter 19 where it used “she” for Maples when Maples was set as a man, there were other pronoun and name errors in other chapters, but I forgot to get screenshots of them. I will definitely send them in the next time I play through it.

Ugh, that does NOT surprise me. I’ll try to find them. I am definitely going to use multireplace next time. I mean, I still could? I’m just afraid of how much time that will take to go through the whole thing.

Then again, I’m already taking centuries :sob:

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