Can we possibly date cute flyboys?
Amazing and if you ever need a beta tester I could do it.
same here would love to help out plus would love a similar game about a Nazi soldier in the war seeing there side of the story maybe change some history lol
I dont think so since homesexuality wasnt accepted in WWII
just look what happened to that guy who broke enighma.
edit: what i meant that OP is trying to have realistic game so he is locking the gender so i dont see how you make Homosexual romance into game since it would requiere load of additional work to do it justice since it would be essentially Forbiden love.
That something isnât accepted doesnât mean it wonât happen (if anything itâs the opposite), but yeahâŚwhat the British government of the time did to Turing was absolutely disgraceful and something that, unlike certain other historical âerrorsâ, they flat out refuse to be properly contrite about.
It all depends on how closely you want to cleave to historical realism. The Marine Raider games allow you to be a female marine lieutenant in the thick of combat, for example, something that also wasnât done on the Commonwealth, American or Fascist sides during the real WWII.
yeah point there being OP stated there wont be female char because of historical accuracy, this doesnt discount gay romance but it would definitely take more work to do it justice in The societal crime of WWII.
Seems like a great idea. Gotta love those historical fiction cogs.
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I would like to read this i love evrything about war specialy company of heroes
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Thank you very much! Ill have the 1st chapter up today!
Thank you! I love company of heroes as well and the first chapter is going up today!
Im thinking about making a series per say. One book about the Airborne, one about the USMC, and one from the perspective of another country, possibly Germany 
And if you would like to help, I would greatly appreciate it!
ow hell yeah do one of were your a German soldier that would be so cool never really get there side
love it up too know cant wait to see the rest dude
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âScreaming Angelsâ is an interesting story about a soldier who has lost everything and is trying to climb his way back up. Or, thatâs what I got from the story, anyway.
While playing, it was somewhat difficult for me to keep up with the story. Especially between the jumping out of the ship and the desertion of the protagonist. If you add more details explaining the conflict, I think I could understand the scene a bit more. Iâm also not sure who Iâm actually playing as. Am I German or American? Due to the year, I assume Iâm a male because women werenât accepted into the ranks back then. Then again, it would be interesting if I was a female playing with the men. What Iâm trying to say is that I would like a bit more background on myself so I can get more invested.
Nonetheless, I didnât run into any continuity errors so thatâs always good.
I did, however, document my play through of the first chapter if youâre interested. Itâs pasted below, separated by page number.
1st Page â
Great, quick intro. Puts you right into the story without any extra blabber.
2nd Page â
Second sentence needs rewriting â why is the date relevant to the deaths?
Good, immersive descriptions of the environment.
Consider writing out numbers when they are being spoken â especially low-character numbers such as twenty-five and seven.
3rd Page â
Consider describing what an AA weapon is for those unfamiliar with weaponry; a brief description such as the generic name and type of the weapon would do; e.g. ârocket launcherâ or âpistol caliberâ. (I donât know my weapons)
Dialogue should be on separate lines.
Donât start sentences with FANBOYS; unless it works better in a certain case. In this case, a comma would have sufficed to make it a compound sentence.
I like the Mass Effect reference, but ânormandyâ needs to be capitalized as it is a proper noun.
Abbreviations need puntuation. E.G. âLt.â On the other hand, âLieutenantâ looks much more professional than âLt.â
The choice âWait for a green lightâ is pretty obvious. Consider rewriting to make it less so?
Nonetheless, I chose to wait.
4th Page-
Iâve noticed a lot of comma splices so far; be careful with commas - less is usually more.
I decide to cut myself down.
5th Page-
Perhaps not the best decision 
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6th Page-
Again, proper nouns need to be capitalized.
Both ânaziâ and âgermanyâ need to be capitalized.
Too many âandsâ. Try to vary that sentence structure.
âBarnâ does not need to be capitalized.
A comma is replacing a period between âwoodsâ and âyourâ Also, incorrect usage of âyouâreâ
7th Page-
I decided to stay where I was
8th Page-
I decided to rush the soldier.
8th Page-
I feel energized.
9th Page-
â10xâ works, but âten timesâ would be better.
10th Page-
Starting the first three sentences with âyouâ makes the flow choppy. Consider revising.
A period is in place of a dash. âdeathâs â an MG42.â Also, it should be âyour deathâ.
Over everything, Iâm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. It seems to be an excellent concept, and if you play your cards right it could turn out very well.
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Thank you for the feedback, and I am going to revise right now
Thank you very much. Once I revise the first chapter, I will fix up the second and upload it!
Personally i love the kill count! 
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Awesome start, played the first chapter and it was a very good intro, tho I did see some errors that are easily fixed. If you still need and or want help, Iâd be more than willing to do so, I donât know script but I am a History Major, working towards becoming a teacher and I can also Beat for you. Just let me know! I look forward to seeing more on this!!
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I wish there are consequences on ur choice or one wrong pick could kill u or teammate(is it right teammate)