On a former colony planet far from ours, students are conscripted to fight a brutal civil war.
Latest update: January 7th, 2026, posted first chapter of demo. (3.4K words)
All chapters are more or less in an early draft state.
If you have finished the demo, please share your first impressions of the story, characters, pacing, and events in the forum thread below. Any feedback can be helpful in improving the game.
Content Warning: This work is intended for adult readers. It contains depictions of child conscription, graphic violence, military cruelty, and characters under extreme psychological distress.
This project does not contain the output of Generative AI.
Defintly caught my attention with this and has great potential so looking forward to what you give us in the future. Might have questions later on but for now nothing at the moment.
I really enjoyed that, I am super looking forward to more
I think you did a great job capturing the tense atmosphere under a militant rule. I love that youve shown Ira to struggle with the âjust following ordersâ part of her position.
This looks like an interesting story to follow with a lot of potential. I found the atmosphere of militerism present throughout the first chapter interesting.
@Doginacan had a quick question just more a curioisty/confirmation att the moment but I assume those of us getting concripted are high-school students correct? Have other questions brewing but thats it for the moment lol
Yes. The student guards were modeled after mandatory youth programs that have existed for high school and university students during authoritarian times.
Thank you for the question. I hadnât realized the concept might be unfamiliar to some readers.
At its current state, I donât plan to use tabletop style stats like strength or intelligence.
What the game does track is your relationships and the impressions you leave on other characters. These variables will be hidden to keep the focus on the story.
All narrative branching will be handled by your choices, and the relationships youâve built up.
There isnât much here for me to form an opinion, but Iâd say this seems promising. As DiGreatDestroyer said, I think chapter 1 could do with being longer, maybe covering the basics of the society we live in, fleshing out Ira and Dunya a tad more, and/or briefly covering our characterâs life so far.