[WIP]The Monarch of Mediana(Space Opera | Updated 16 Dec | 47k words)

Great update keep tho I am curious why you don’t put this chapter first it seems like to me that it would make more sense being all the stat bonuses but besides that very well done so far

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I like it. Can’t wait to see more

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@Lucifur-dark thanks! I didn’t put it in the beginning because i want some stat progression for the player, mostly in preparation of the next chapter. Which involves some fighting.

@Badger Glad you like it!

Do we get to have wild & hardcore ### with our RO’s and can we have option to see all of it instead of fade to black or something if not please give us option choose fade to black or see and interact with whole ### content.

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While in the hunt there an error prompt : “c3 line 602: invalid @{} at letter 56; ‘hunt_target’ is equal to 3 but there are only 2 options”

Is this the end of the update ?

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@Arcknight_Tyson uhh, I think the ongoing demo will only have the fade-to-black scenes because I want to keep this version for the public. Afterwards there might be an adult version, though I need to check the content policies before doing anything.

@JoshiYinmith Fixed! There should be a little more content at the back.

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This premise is really strong. The idea of being a “hero“ who’s actually a cage for something horrifying is super compelling, and the corruption mechanic fits the story perfectly. Vessel Zero feels unique and memorable I’d definitely love to see it continued.

Great stuff. I’ll be following.

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Thank you!

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A little update:

So I’ve returned from my trip and made some progress on the next two parts (Part IV and V), which will be the next major combat that wraps up the entirety of Act I. The issue is that there will be roughly 3 major routes you can approach it, with at most 2 sub routes per major one, so… it’s a lot of work. Currently I am 10k words in and not even finishing 1 route, which means the next update may take a while. I aim to get at least 1 route out by the end of February though. Fingers crossed I don’t run into the writer’s block in the meantime :3

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