(WIP) The Iron King's Heir (Royalty, Fantasy | 20k) update 05/19/25

To answer ‘something else’ I plan to be a combination of diplomacy and tyrant. Basically a very manipulative MC who is nice and diplomatic as long as it serves her. The moment you’re seen as useless in her eyes it’s bye bye.

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Personally I’ll try to be the ideal ruler for my kingdom but outside my kingdom, if someone start something, I’m razing the place.

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I have noticed that the genders are constantly being swapped around one sentence i am a male pc the next i am female it is throwing off the entire rhythm of the story. But the narrative and setting of the story is interesting.

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Yes this is a weak spot of mine I will admit, I tend to picture the PC as female and sometimes absentmindedly write that in instead of coding it. Slowly fixing that for the update, feel free to send any screenshots where this happens. Thanks for playing!

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It’s amazing I just hate being a weakling

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Thanks! I’m working on an update to hopeful fix some of this and (a) give the PC a bit more agency and (b) explain better why you do not (yet) carry a sword. For future chapters, you will be able to decide to carry a weapon and be more aggressive.

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Is there going to be same sex romance‽

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Not according to the intro post

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Awe it would be good for the drama parts

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Can’t wait to aura farm

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Demo is not working.

Strange, it’s working on my end. Is there a specific spot where it’s crashing for you?

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I click to start the Demo and nothing appears.

I really like the story. Although I noticed a few typos here and there, nothing major. Have you considered making a Discord server so you can easily interact with your supporters and share feedback more quickly to exchange ideas and opinions?

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A Discord server sounds super fun! I wasn’t sure if it was too early in the project to get much engagement there, but if I think there’s enough interest I’d be down. I’ve never been part of a WIP server so I also don’t know what they look like.

That’s very strange, I wonder if it’s something off on your end. It’s working for me on desktop and mobile, and I haven’t heard any other complaints. Sorry I don’t know how to fix it :pensive_face:

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I would wait until you have a bit more out first

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hellanikthi,
Thanks for checking, it might be error on my computer.

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use a differnt browser like opera or mozilla so dont got any problems with those two chrome i stopped a long time ago using

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