It should be a different line he states. I get he will definitely say something. Just the line he said made me feel like, ‘but I didnt hurt them!’
He will see all 9 standing and my sword dropped to the ground and me stumbling away. That is his first perception check that only needs a 2 in to pass. Gotta be an idiot to not notice 9 men standing around a girl that stumbles. It would need a 10 to notice the hitch maybe? The depowering of muscle is hard to hide to a very experienced knight.
My mind would automatically go. What the hell those boys doing to the little girl?
The brother saying what he said is fine. It doesn’t need a change. They did hesitate because of my actions of mercy/kind.
Edit: Yeah, appearance of the MC would matter to since I reread my post. Little girl surrounded by 9 boys versus Big girl surrounded. They were all standing with weapons if I remember correctly.
Yep our action to spare them in tournament should of been brought into consideration especially since it was witnessed by the audience there as well. The punishment just needs to be adjusted a bit for good Mc or a MC that just left after disarming them all. I was just a bit confused since didn’t even attack them.
For the next update I’ll make sure to tweak that last scene, I’m probably gonna try to do my best to add ROs too but I will likely need a lot of feedback on that so please help me in that regard! Saying that, the next update won’t quite be as quick as my previous ones sadly so sorry about that.
Definitely. Heck she’s the first to accept the MC for who they are regardless of race. I’m looking forward to meeting more people to interact with instead of just her and her dad.
The story just felt empty if u turned Ash away from the meeting since there is literally no one else to train with or hang out with. It also obviously annoyed the knight so he was also locked out of any potential scenes. I mean I get it since it shows how bad and neglected the MC is but hopefully double locks won’t happen again for disagreeing with one person.
Ash will definitely be an RO, I will be trying to add in a couple more but Ash is a lock. At the moment, my plan with sexuality is no labels and just let the player do what they like. I’m open to changing that if people prefer a different approach, but I wanted as few blocks as possible so that’s the current plan. Also completely open to RO suggestions, if there a specific type of person that people like to see as an RO etc
I find it weird the my mc reaches for a weapon despite training and fighting without one. And maybe down the road when you have time you could polish up on the unarmed combat ad fighting style with some kicks. Readying up your dominant hand just sounds like mc is fighting wih just the one hand. Despite having knees, elbows etc. and yes i would want a wolf wife
There is definitely the potential, I mentioned it before with how I like to have a general outline and expand things based on how I’m feeling when writing. I’m still undecided entirely on the subject of other half-breeds, it is definitely possible for them to exist in the world. To say something without spoiling too much, there is something that is the reason for your survival, and it is entirely possible for another to have that same situation too. The only issue with that is that none would be in the kingdom and so they would be introduced much later on in the story from anyone else.
