Hey, here’s a sight for the sore eyes! This has very heavy detective show vibes, and it’s certainly appreciated - I liked how the police station and its inhabitants were shown and how feds were the intruding part, and a clearly unwanted one.
Main issue is the fact there’s really not that much of the station shown before feds arrive - the contrast isn’t there yet, although they certainly are very unlikeable. Were they supposed to be LIs if all I want to do is punch them in the teeth?