WIP Pushed (Thriller, Romance, Combat) | Chapter 5 is fully out and complete|šŸ„³

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OMG! I had no idea I was harboring a desperate need to be a mood young goth girl!!

I demand more people to ignore/glare at, and more places to stomp around!!

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:+1: :genie:

Your wishes will be answered!

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Chapter 5 is updated on dashingdon, [ NEW RO introduced, classes started and finding something wrongā€¦Harper?
(Find more info on your passed away mom!)

Please report any grammar problems or bugs!
(New RO description)

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Hi!

Can we know whatā€™s the actual wordcount?

Will this stay sfw or will it move on to the adult category?

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I am considering putting the adult content in another whole file, so I can post it in the adult category.
The word count is 16,090!

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Hey. Donā€™t know if itā€™s just me, but there seems to be a bug here in Chapter 1 in the first interaction with dad:

Canā€™t post with photos for some reason: but it says ā€œchapter 1 line 246: Expected option starting with #ā€

Canā€™t say much yet since I havenā€™t got pass the character customization because of the bug. But I can say, the premise interest me, would like to see where this goes :hibiscus:

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fixed, sorry bout that!

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Error is still showing. There is also an error with the save slots: Error: Bad Slot - Has smPlugin been included?

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There is something wrong with dashingdon and my files soooooo iā€™ll start anew with the whole thing.
The link will not be working until I update.

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omg, sorry guys. Iā€™m having troubles with my own files. NEW LINK AGAIN, this is the final link.

https://dashingdon.com/play/sarah-k/pushed-1/mygame/

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It still shows the ā€œ:Error: Bad Slot - Has smPlugin been included?ā€ error for save slots.

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Okay, NOW its fixed. :face_exhaling:

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Thanks so much :D. The Save/Load function works now.

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New cover! This is the cover for the whole IF, I am making these for each chapter so youā€™ll see them soon! :wink:

dashpic

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Check out the thread of (WIP) Vengeance | Choose being a Villain or Hero| (UPDATE: MAR 1, 2024)!

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The cover looks cool as heck.

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I am halfway done with chapter 6!

  • NEW RO

  • FOUND OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO MOM

  • STARTING OF WINTER QUARTER.

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Forgot to say but there is a Winter dance so choose a RO to go withā€¦

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Now comes the difficult part since I like all of them

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Interesting but slow pacing and lacks the drama, seriousness or tragedy it should have to propel the story in the beginning, the writing feels too much teen drama show from The CW to be taken seriously.

If the premise is investigating your friendā€™s death, why in the beginning arenā€™t we shown the tragic part? Show donā€™t tell after all.

The plot point of switching laptops by accident with someone and getting into spy school is very unrealistic and silly to be taken seriously since the actual student is in the spy school and a spy school would probably thoroughly vet students who enter if theyā€™re not actually suppose to be there.

The going to spy school part was also a plot device that was used to push the passive MC around, it would be better for the MC to be active in their investigations.

Overall the writing average and I didnā€™t feel any drama, thrill or urgency, it felt like a cheesy high school show to me.