(WIP) Path of Martial Arts: The Beginning (Dark, Eastern Fantasy | 750k words)

Hey How do I use the golden seed in the last moment instead of the bomb?Everytime I use it in that scenario always kills me

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When fighting the martial artists that follows under long chen, I repeat absolutely under no circumstances use that golden seed to fight unless it is against long chen only

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And make sure you have healing talisman when long chen punches you

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I just found this gem and I want to say I love it sooooo much! (Understanding and reading Chinese wuxia stories myself since small, I’m so in love with this work.) I’m wondering where I can find the specific name corresponding to the ROs? Like is it 唐若?梅梅?

And also, I’m playing to the part that only just met Mei Mei. I 'm wondering if I can have complex reasoning behind simple accept and refuse? Like Accept doesn’t mean want to be Mei Mei’s friend, maybe MC just want to take advantage of the great paste. And refuse doesn’t mean want to refuse Mei Mei as a friend, but becasue MC think he shouldn’t receive such precious gift without doing anything to earn it :frowning: Like I chose refuse thinking this reason, but MC automatically defaults to thinking all He clan are bad and so is Mei Mei… Some other options feel the same way as well, I hope I can have different reasoning option toward the same actions… but regardless of that this is such a good work. Thank you so much for creating it :slight_smile:

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IDK about the rest, but I do know that Mei uses 美.

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美美!Beauty beauty, a bit unconventional but well she is certainly beautiful :)Thank u for letting me know!

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ma rin is wild :skull: :skull_and_crossbones:

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Mei Mei is her nickname, her real name is He Mei.

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Technically, accepting the psste can be considered as taking advantage of Mei’s “goodwill”, after all, this “gift” comes with certain consequences.

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Love what I’ve read so far.

I have one very small, very nerdy suggestion, as a scholar of religion.

In the very start of the demo (first page I believe), you write “the cycle of Samsara is therefore completed”, however, the term Samsara itself connotes a cycle. So it’s kind of like writing “naan bread” or “chai tea” in that it’s understood as “The cycle of cyclic change” - so I would just change it to “Samsara is therefore completed” or “The cycle of life and death is therefore completed”

That being said, the word itself can just be translated as “wandering”, so I’m not saying it’s incorrect, more that it can just seem a bit redundant.

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Pov:when meeting meeting ma rin when she is relaxing at the pool and decides to use a towel to cover up

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i will forever hold a grudge against the towel that got to hug my fantasies

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Fucking towel is the worst PoMA character

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don’t worry, you’ll get there eventually

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Me thanking the towel for covering the hag.

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:man_shrugging:t5: :man_shrugging:t5: :man_shrugging:t5: at least she is still hot and rocking

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Is this a scene in the game

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I feel like game traffic and fanfare fell to half since it’s been hosted in itch.io

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Yes is a scene in the game, it happens when ma rin summons mc for discussion before the expedition

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Amazing game

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New update:

  • complete code overhaul of the game. A lot of mechanics have been changed: no more training grinding, less convolution, new talents and more.
  • continuation of the story after expedition (around 20k)
  • save system should work better now

Boosty update is also out, with a massive event about new RO =) Nick - exclusive content on Boosty 18+

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