Have a male gay character, select chase for the birthday celebration. Atm the nsfw isnt quiet nsfw
You can be glad it’s even there tbh I really really dislike writing nsfw and I think that shows
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You do a good job with what you got in your wheelhouse. Besides you created a lovingly twisted world with fun characters.
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Thx I am really anxious about that (ik how readers can react when they don’t get nsfw and ngl it’s scaring me lol) xX (and if you want more twists head over to my tumblr!)
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You have to confess to him and just in case, don’t donate too much blood, it affects the ending of one of the volery(I don’t remember which one). And you must stay at home with him. I usually play as the Hawks and I have no problem getting that scene.
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I also wanted to ask. Has the bug with Chase’s intimate scene been fixed? (I think I remember that it was a bug) If we played the path of ambition, will there be a mention of it?
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There should be an entire scene for the ambitious path just talking about it, I cant check that the next few days however but it should be there.
If not it will be gone for a few more days as I want to focus on at least finishing one route first.
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Okay I am still missing two things: drive back home and Richard (which I bet not many people are together with him anyway so its no priority rn).
If anything seems out of place there is likely something missing, please let me know about it!
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Posted the link to the new and VERY SHORT demo!
(There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors, the weather has me under constant headaches, so please let me know if you find them!)
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So why did you decide to do a rewrite?
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I wasnt happy with the way the changed plot didnt fit in the demo at all, so I decided a rewrite was better.
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Ooh, is that cover image new too, or didn’t I just see it before?
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The cover image is new too, yes!
I am not happy with it, but thats all I can do with the free version haha.
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Free version of what? 
I’m curious now.
I was going to say I still can’t decide between being Chase’s Wing and being transmasc, but since that hasn’t appeared yet in the current demo… well, I guess I did say it after all.
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Canva, I use it for all my WIPs covers
Feel free to play around!
I wish I had more to share but since I am away the rest of the week I wanted to at least post what I have so far so you guys can already „experience“ the new demo 
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The rewrite is interesting in how it’s letting us experience what being a student member of the cult was like before the Strays entered the picture, and stirred things up.
But I think the old demo just throwing us straight to the action so to speak with their introduction, the suspicious blood donations, the creepy groomer for ambitious MC etc also had its merits.
Either way I’m eager to see more of this story.
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Both methods have their flaws and good things I agree. I just felt that the old demo focused too much on the strays, taking the spotlight away from the things that hadn’t even been lit up enough in my opinion. And don’t worry you will get right back into the blood donations and creepy groomer (although his path did change a lot)!
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I think your writing style’s changed too, so a rewrite absolutely makes sense in that regard.
(I’m missing the strays already though.)
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I hope for the better 
what difference a year can make.
Oh they miss you too! But they will show up, just a bit later than before.
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It’s different, whether or not it’s better depends on what feel you want it to have 
I have no opinion on the matter.
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