WIP: Fallen Hero 2: Retribution - updated 27 april 2019 (pre-adult version)

You had me at 10 bucks

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The only POV of heraldā€¦I wanna read aboutā€¦is how much pain he gonna be in when Iā€™m done with himā€¦:smirk:

Ah I see you are a man of leg breaking culture as well friend.

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It just makes the most sense if you look at the molds of hero characters

Fun fact: Ortega and the MC both were the main characters for their respective stories when they were books. I fused them for this tale.

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It could very well also be Ortega. In fact considering the nature of how both mc and oretga are connected more so than Herald and mc, your theory would be more accurate if it was Ortega. They have the longest deepest connection with them if you are friends and above .And considering the nemesis path with oretga. Your theory would maybe make more sense if Ortega/mc have a distant relationship. In that scenario anyone could be the main protagonist.

Trueā€¦but I was also thinking this as a CC game, where if this was a different CC game we would more then likely be put in place as Herald, new member, youngest member, beautiful, etc

Yupā€¦ thatā€™s your thought

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Wait there were books?
More fallen hero?
Backstory?
When and more importantly where since GIMME

lol from what I understand (learned this recently myself)ā€¦but fallen hero was a book before it become a choiceofgame storyā€¦

G I M M E

But this makes me wonder about some stuff about what would be canon or not. Were Ortega and MC in a relationship or just friends? Was MC a massive brooding asshole or were they good at faking happiness? Also most importantly, how did Heralds legs get broken? Itā€™s not an if itā€™s a how.

that should be a bookā€¦stand aloneā€¦for us who hate himā€¦

we could come up with the most gory crunshy way to break his legsā€¦

like those books about cuisineā€¦with recipeeā€¦:smirk:

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The only canon is what is inside Fallen Hero: Rebirth right now. Not even the stuff in this WiP is canon, its subject to change still.

Whaaaaat, I donā€™t HATE him per say.
I just think he is better when he is crying.
And canā€™t move.
And when he doesnā€™t have a smug ass grin.
And when he is bleeding.
And in pain.
And crying.
Besides that he aight :smiley:

ALSO WHEN HE ISNT FUCKING WITH MY BOMB, GOD DAMN IT HERALD THE SAVE SYSTEM WASNT A THING YET YOU FUCK

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Well then I wonder what the ā€œcanonā€ route would be. There always tends to be a canon way to do this stuff so I wonder what the author considers to be the canon way to do things in FHR

dont worryā€¦the book will include wimpy scene with simple easy not so sadistic momentsā€¦where he has to stare at alot of onions and cry and bawlā€¦

but the rest of the book will be filled with vilainy moments lol

Itā€™s just a collection of short stories about Heralds suffering.

10/10 IGN
Would cripple Herald again

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The book was never published, turned it into this instead. BUT Herald got his leg broken in it.

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I always knew my Herald abuse was cannon :wink:

@malinryden Seriously, thank you for turning the books into a CoG IF series. Without you doing so, I would never had discovered your awesome story telling and game making abilities :two_hearts:

ttyl.

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And the world is set right.
Are we allowed to know the ā€œCanonā€ genders of Ortega and MC and what their relationship was?
Or do you not really know yourself or have changed it since itā€™s unreleased state.
Also it would be cool if you release that unreleased book as a dlc or something, I know id pay a few bucks for that, but if you donā€™t have it or just donā€™t want to thatā€™s fine. :slight_smile:

This guys series is basically the only reason I became a proper hardcore fan of COG games and started lurking around the forums, since it left me craving more I loved it so much.