WIP: Fallen Hero 2: Retribution - updated 27 april 2019 (pre-adult version)

More puppets for my MC, except for Ortega. Sort of

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Whel option 2( having a crush on you) is the closest thing to what you’re describing. After agreeing to train him. Option 3 is something I’m personally looking forward to. :grin:

Not now, but I think there should be in the future? Malin said there will be more options, this is all just basics rn.

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Can’t the MC just bring a tranq gun, and shoot Ortega just in case they get in the way?.

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What do you guys think will be more angst juicy; Ortega being suspicious of the MC or Ortega being terrified of the MC’s villain persona? Except for the ol’ Ortega/ Villain nemesis complex because we all know that ones going to hurt.

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suspicious


because thats pure drama right there ! I mean
you are lying right in her face
and she have to force you into a confrontation sooner or later . (I doubt mc will , unless super angry persona) .

where terrified
thats mostly
more on the battlefield


terrified tell me ortega will just stand in the way of a moving car .

suspicious ortega
will stop you from getting that drink from the fridge and wont budge till you tell tha truth 
while in your pj :smile:

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I can’t wait for that confrontation with Ortega -V- from it being her somehow finding your lair or from the battlefield where she somehow gets your mask off

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Ortega : you can’t drink until you tell me the truth

MC : Hmmmm
 i am actually not that thirsty anymore , that’s a truth :wink:

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you call that angsty drama ?

too much peace lovin’ dear lol

Ortega: You can’t get that drink till I get the truth out of you!

MC: Fine
I gotta pee anyway!

Ortega stamp to the bathroom

Ortega: You cannot Pee until I get the truth out of you !

MC: Mommmmmmm!

:rofl:

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I shouldn’t visit the Rangers HQ in the first place , my own HQ is better 

But wait
 you meant Ortega actually invade my HQ? :-):scream:

That would be so angsty my friend

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the thing is


Ortega is stubborn , we know that . So she won’t give up
easely (Or ever) . And thats part of what make ortega
well
Ortega
(#OrtegaISLife)

But how would she go about it though ? There is the buandery of privacy that the mc always knew how to keep her at bay with


something tell me
she gonna guilt trip the mc like mad .

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I believe if there are to many suspicion and perhaps a friendly (“friendly”) relationship with steel she might push it

why would Steel get involved ? even on friendly terms
he barely tolerate the mc lol

Just seems from what we see that he would do as a character

what do you mean ?

Steel to me
come off like old school kinda of person . He won’t butt into Ortega business , unless she beg him to . And even then
he wont do it willingly and probably will have a back up plan (that ortega wont know about and wont agree with ) to take charge of the situation if she fail
which will make Ortega pissed
and the mc Bolt and turn total vilain !

point finger at Steel I TOLD YOU HE HATE MEH!!! SEEEEEE!

Ortega: How could you Steel! Badd Steel!

Steel: kick invisible rock
tis the last time I try to help someone
I swear


*Herald came crashing on the scene * What are we doing today Gang! Notice the mc and blush oh
-
mc
oh


*Lady Argent watch from the ceiling glued there for no reason and hissing * Hisss!

I need more coffee now
:rofl:

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Oof I just see Steel as one who has a hard outer shell but has a heart of gold that holds his friend’s best interest in his heart

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Lol. No. If you just hate everyone. Then there isn’t much angst to go on. Having a relationship above 50 with everyone will sweeten the angst. Give it that extra sugar. I think living in the shittiest house in the towns backyard coupled with having no stationary base should keep the farm and the rangers at bay for a while

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no I’m aware lol it’s a thing between me and eric , I was just teasing him .

I dont think that would stop them . I mean you almost died
and they were there to collect you . Talk about vultures !

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It’s the least worst scenario. And least suspicious of them al. Living in the hotel or anywhere that is stationary is a big mistake in my opinion. Never say no to paranoia in this story. It’s the mcs spidey sense. And yes sooner or later they will find the Mc. But maybe it will keep at least the rangers at bay. Till the final hours before something gets messed up. Steel is the biggest problem when it comes to suspicious behaviour. Ortega , not soo much. Mainly because Mc is eather too cute or too friendly for her/him to notice anything. Herald, too much “I love you/you’re my hero”. Argent, might not care about mcs villian persona . But is also likely the first to find out.