Sort-of continuity error.
In the flashback talk, if the puppet is flirting with/dating Ortega, the choice [let puppet have their fun, Iâll make sure Ortega knows weâre just friends] leads to a break-up scene, which makes no sense if the MC has not initiated anything in their own body.
Upon further inspection, all of the choices leading from [label puppet] imply an existing relationship between Ortega and MC in her own body, which might not be the case.
Heartbreak Dose Some Heartbreaking; A fan fiction.
Part 1
THE RETURN.
" Stop it!" you shout. How could this be? For so long you thought that she was dead. For so long you had thought the nightmares where only in youâre dreams. But the truth spoke otherwise. She had returned. A living, real nightmare. This time.
Today was the day you and Dr Mortun had planed youâre next date. As neither of you were in youâre typical good spirit, you in particular. You as Yasmin had agreed with her to meet outside the MOVIENOIE. Los Diablos largest movie chain. Of course secretly owned by Hollow Ground. Youâre tickets verified and youâre snacks gathered. You followed Mortun into one of the larger theater rooms. The movie you were watching was apparently called The Bane. Some rouge mod that had to find her way back to loved ones. Something you increasingly found distribing. Maybe because it reminded you of youâre own life. The need to be loved, to be free, to be in controll. No. You where already free, in controll. Until she showed up. But what about being loved. Was it something worth pursuing? You certainly canât stay away from Ortega. Maybe you could⊠" You think too much David boy!"
You feel your mind being pulled backwards. Again. The sound of sirens coming in front of you, or was it behind you? You canât tell, as youâre desperately trying to be in controll of Yasmins body. The vision of the theater screen in front of you, blurring in and out.
To youâre left, you can feel Dr Mortun shifting your way. âSomething wrong ma chĂ©rie?â You try to respond but itâs getting harder and harder to maintain Yasmins body. " No, just , bathroom, be back" you need to get out of here, escape before its to late. Before she catches you again. âLiar! Liar!â You hear Heartbreak scream inside you.
" Ok ma chĂ©rie. Just donât take too long. This is too god of a movie to miss out." Desperately pushing youâre way across the seats you bolt for the door hearing some muttering curses behind you. âNeed to find a toiletâ. Youre steps are getting heavier and heavier now.
It had started halfway through the movie. As the Bane was fighting some sort of boosted ninja named the Wielder, you began to feel a cold presence Inside you. Getting colder and colder. Like putting an ice block on top of youâre head. Suddenly you found youre mind being tugged hard. You where no longer in the theater but back to youâre own nightmare. The acid air, Anthennas ripped body laying in front of you. The window you jumpt out of last time. The unconscious Heartbreak. Wait, where was she?
" Helo David boy. Remember me?" The voice had startled the shit out of you. âWhat?â You turn to youâre right to find Yasmin. She is wearing a white hospital gown. Her blond shoulder length hair, straight as ever . But there was something wrong about her. Where she normaly possessed two warm brown eyes, they where mow cold blue like youâres.
" Of course you remember me." She laughs âEvery night if Iâm not wrong. Even made youâre puppet look like me. Do you like what you see? Is that what you do before you posess them. gazing and gawking at them? Knowing that there is nothing stopping you from swollowing them whole?â She laughs again. âIt seems I taught you wellâ You canât stop staring at her. Youre mind racing with questons. Racing with panic. How could this be? Is she realy here, alive?
âHeartbreak, youâreâ
" I have always been alive" she interrupts you. Of course she must be reading youâre mind.
âNo thatâs impossible!â You shout. âIâ .
"Stopped me! Donât be a fool pup. Iâve been inside youâre head Al these years. Weak, helpless. Until you got youâre hands on those nanobots. The power from youâre precious rat king not only strengthened you but also me. Enough to fnnaly wake up. But by then you had hoppted to this body. Trust me pup, finding you in my current state was quite hard. But not hard enough "
" Thatâs impossible. You canât be alive.! You donât even have a boddy. You canât live without one"
" Are you sure pup?. It dosent matter. It wont matter. What does matter little David boy is that you and I are the same. We come from the same cloth. Weâre just cut differntly"
âWhat, youâre from the farmâ . What was she talking about?
She laughs at you âis that what you call them? Fitting concidering what they do.â
âThis canât be happeningâ. If sheâs alive , if shes real then that means
" I have youâre real boddy clever pup. And donât try to runn. It would make youâre existence much shorter. You donât want to end up like youâre friend over there, right pup?" She points a finger towards Anthennas limp body.
You try to pull youreself back to reality. you have to get out of here back to youâre own boddy.
âAw poor David, you still think youâre in controll. Have you forgotten who taught you to be in controll?â
âHuh?â
Before you have time to react you are struck by an imense pain. Electrical wires forming around youâre body.
âThe first thing you have to teach any pup is to be obedient. Isnât that right David boy?â You find yourself unable to speak, to even move. Pain coursing trough youâre whole body.
âNow here is how things are gona go pup. You are going to stay here, forever or until Iâve drained you of youâre power completely. While I will finnish Wat I started al those years ago. If itâs any consolation, Iâll say hi to youâre friends. That Latino girl in particular. What was her name again?â
Oh No. The Rangers. Ortega. You have to get out of here NOW. But the more you resist the more it hurts. The more the wires coil harder around youâre body. You have to remember that this isnât real, but how can you when the pain is as real as it gets.
âThatâs right Ortega.â
What if you did things like last time. Instead of resisting the pain maybe you should embrace it. It had nearly shattered youâre soul into tiny broken shards. Unfixable. Was it worth it. No you where something else back then. Something weak. Youâre something different now. If it means gaining youâre freedom back, then it worth it.
" Aw, itâs charming that you think that you can escape pup. But donât fool yourself. I know you. Al youâre dreams, youâre fears, the scars you hide from the world. The lies and manipulatios you whive together in order to be accepted by these pathetic humans. It disgusts me!" She spits on the floor. Giving you an angry stare.
âThey deserve nothing but miserable torture and death. Do you think they made us to be cute loving childrenâs of god? " She turns her back to you. " Loveâ she pufs out. âEverytime I got close to someone or something they would always find a way to take it from me until i had nothing to cling to. Only to reset my mind again and again, keeping the broken parts but wiping out the rest.â
She turns to you again.
" The humans call me Heartbreak. How fitting it is when Iâll be returning the favour in kind. And YOU" She points a blaming finger at you . âYou think you can be like them, feel what they feel? Call yourself a stupid name. Like they do. Be loved?â She spits. This time towards you.
" I think you talk too much" you manage to yelp out.
It was now or never. While the wires where stuck to your chests and arms you could still move youâre leggs. It was the only little freedom you had. You will yourself to move towards her. The pain increasing tenfold. You had to ignore it. No embrace it. Move! Move Towards her. Towards the window. Take controll of Yasmin.
âNOâ She shouts. Trying to stopp what you are doing. "Stop it you shout back trough Yasmins mouth. You can feel youâre legs turning into jelly. But you manage to throw yourself towards her. Normaly this kind of struggling would have killed you back then. But that was then, this is now. Back and forth you both battle over youre legs. No not just yours, Yasmins as wel. As she slowly moves towards the nearest toilet.
With a final painful push of youâre raw will, you both crash towards the window you once jumped out of , and out into the open.
Darkness, and then you find yourself back to reality. Yasmins body collapsing against the toilet door.
âUghâ That hurt.
âMa chĂ©rie!â You hear behind you. âAre you alright?â You turn to see Dr Mortun with a worried face and crossed arms, staring back at you.
âIâm fineâ. You say softly. The battle had taken its heavy tol, and you could still at the back of youâre head feel the sensation of pain you just experienced a moment ago.
" I think I just ate the wrong kind of snacks". You say. How could you tell her that an insane telepath just atacked you. Too many questions. Too little time. Besides that would mean revealing youreself to her. And youâre not sure if you are ready to deal with that right now.
Heartbreak is still out there. Pretending to be you.You have to find her. Find youre body. Take it back. You wonât be able to use youâre telepathic abilities as Yasmin. Like senseing an atack now. Youre powerless. That means relying on dampeners. You hate it. But you know itâs the safest way to keep youâre mind safe.
Safe like Anthenna was safe? From her?
âYou were gone for so long ma chĂ©rie. It made me worried. Didnât I tell you to hurry back?â
Had it been that long? âLookâ. You say as you rise up from the ground slowly. " I think we need to end it for today. Iâm kinda feeling sick".
" Do you need a drive home?"
âWould I want it any other way?â You say as you give her a kiss.
âOf course not ma chĂ©rieâ. She kisses you back.
âGood. Then letâs go home. Do you think you can hold me. I think Iâm gona collapse again.â
" We Woudnt want that". She says with a smug expression.
" Just shut up and hold me already!"
With her smug expression still abroad, Dr Mortun puts an arm over youre shoulders as both of you head back towards the lobby. And out into the fresh nightlife outside. Youâre thoughts a million miles elsewhere.
Zomg collapsing on the run to the toilet doors⊠perfect date! 
Finally managed to post it on tumblr. just found out what AO3 is and the invite will get there by tomorow i think 
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Is that where people usually post them? Itâs the first time for me as a user of tublir as well. And holy crap are things everywhere. So much confuseing stuff for my British brain to handle. If I want to post my fanfic do I just click on the big pen and post it as a text while being on the fallen hero rebirth site?
Reverse you and I are alike. Malin just had to give me a guide on how to hide my spoilers with a âKeep readingâ sign and even then I needed to google more instructions online. I keep having the same problem with computers. I feel like my grandma when she was confronted with the digital age⊠âIt wonât work because i donât know which is the right button and keep pressing the wrong one.â
So this is how it should work.
Click the little house that says Dashboard, then the pen, then choose text, then get a title, then a very short introduction âThis is me, this is my fanfic etcâ press enter to leave a blank space, then on that blank line press the 3 dots symbol that adds the âRead moreâ link and copy your fanfic below.
So people should see only your introduction and the read-more link, and when they press it, they get to the whole text.
Also, at the bottom of all, add Hastags so people can find it.
âOf course, that was your reputation back in the daysâ
This is added because you choose vigilant background.
Otherwise, everytime you choose to be a hero hunter, you will get the âyou are still thinking aboutâŠwith cheap modsâ dialogue.
Doesnât matter, if you beat him to pulp in the fight.
Thanks @CJS.
Just posted it
I wish the website could stop spamming me with how to use its functions. " oh hey check this, ow check that." Ugh. 
. Oh whel what can I do. Iâll just settle for disappointment. And hope that itâs not bad carma. On tublirs behalf.
Well⊠as I already said in that reply, I did have a sidestep with a hero background, not vigilante, but I was still shown that. And from the code, it would seem like that quote will appear regardless of whether the MC was a sidekick, vigilante or hero.
In any case, malin has said some variant paths were missed out when those scenes were first updated, but those bugs would be addressed in the next update. 
(Gremlin Mode intensifies)
I, personally, am building a mountain of Gremlins all teetering precariously atop one semi-stable Grump (the OG), and at this point in the alpha I CANâT STOP CHANGING RIDICULOUSLY MINUTE DETAILS OF THEIR PERSONALITIES
Also canât decide if I want to play nice with Steel or pull his pigtails until he starts noticing when Iâm gone 
Wrong pronoun used in this sentence. This might have already been reported:
Well, you certainly showed her now, the only disappointment is that you had to wear a mask while beating her. Though seeing the look on his face when you told her your name⊠thatâs a memory youâll treasure.
Correction:
Second sentence, that âhisâ should be her.
Omfg i was crying at the dog park part as someone that have depression seeking dogs for comfort was so relatable 
Wait, is the dog park scene in already? I thought that wasnât implemented yet since itâs been grayed out for me when I reach the end of the shrink scene. Only option Iâve been able to pick is Herald training. Are there some specific requirements to unlock it?
You DONâT agree to go to the therapy. Then you have an option to train Herald or go to the park. And in the park you meet Chen.
Oh, neat will have to give that a try, thanks! Didnât realize it was mutually exclusive with the shrink since Herald training could be done afterwards regardless.
Itâs not mutually exclusive, but if you go to the therapy you must not agree to train Herald. At least it is that way now.
Everyoneâs talking about Herald and here I am wishing to woo Rosie/Boris
Found a variable that appears in game. The very text in bold.
âA likely story.â You give him a disapproving look. âI agreed to this to help the team, not to get picked up.â
âOh.â Thereâs a faint flush of embarrassment on his cheeks. âIâm sorry. I misunderstood.â
âYou sure did. Take a break, take a leave of absence if you need to. But grow up before you get anyone killed.â set herald_relationship "awkward"
Man itâs gonna be real awkward having to deal with flirting with Ortega, Dr Mortum and Argent. And now Heraldâs crushing on us too, jeepers.
Speaking of Herald- is there a way to express an opinion of him thatâs somewhere between Horny and Disgusted? Like my PC isnât into him, but she doesnât want to break the kidâs spirit all the time, just some of the time, and it feels a little one-or-the-other
