I was suprise to reread the same thing again. So i wonder if you could be more specific about the add update. thx
Until next.
[Edit] never mind i didn’t read this topic 
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child actor + some more year in the wood industry = yeah he is on something.
oooh i remember, the last time he was around wasn’t in a movie but in some hilarious adventure him vs internet troll. That why he isn’t around 
Just read he is into independat films. Meh
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I think our bodyguard is the Knight of War.
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Well, that might make things awkward for my MC, considering I prefer playing a sub in relationships. Unless it’s only about how the house is handled, not so much the bedroom shenanigans.
Ah well, society can go bite itself.
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I mean… while society might have its ‘opinions,’ your MC can always just decide they don’t give a damn about them. 
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If there is one thing my MC is good at, it’s not giving a damn about society’s opinion. 
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For some reason, the bodyguard gives me guardian angel vibes, maybe he is a avatar of one the gods and is accompanying mc to fulfill they destiny but will reason with us first like he did when optionally mc killed that dude and might possibly strike us down if he don’t like where we are heading and refuse to change from that path of destruction
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I theorize, if you do the divinition card thing, that he’s what the Knight of War represents. (the avatar of Karas)
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Honestly, that old man really annoyed me when he interfered with our MC going for vengeance and basically slapped us around the head and told us to get a grip.
No way this washed up knight is talking down to a rightfully enraged MC who was just kidnapped by a knock-off villain and saw their favourite guard die for them, and then on top of that he was hitting his employers heir. If I didn’t believe he’d be so important to the plot, I honestly would have made my MC see him as an enemy from then on lmao. Guy’s out of his gourd.
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To be honest, I approved of Nemio actions, like take a moment, our mc was just child at that time in one day that knew loss, anger, sorrow and resentment but in all of that where was restraint, Yes our mc was valid to kill there enemies but the mc didn’t stop when they enemy was already dead but kept on doing it for various reasons in hatred and grief which were understandable but the other one satisfaction, that is the one, nemio had to step in, to knock some sense in, if in that part, mc optionally smile at they work, does that tell you mc will be a hero, a anti hero that knows right from wrong, or a anti hero who was young and smile that they think this how the world works and if so there are free to exact cruelty on those that have any connection to those that wrong the mc and finally and worst of all mc choosing to become a tyrant of a villain that will shape the world to there own vision with atrocities at there wake, heck that black Knight we saw in the mirror might have been the mc but much older that chose the path of villany since it was the future, I think, being a Knight of war, does that mean mc end wars or make wars for the right or wrong reason
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Was going to say, my MC killed him and didn’t get a smack from what I remember. But he only did what he had to and no more.
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I really enjoyed reading this work. The characters are memorable; the shock and loss of our idyllic innocence a keen edged surprise; the degree of branching ambitious.
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Hey, everyone!
I’ve decided to delay this month’s update until next month. The current word count of the update is around 60k words, but there are still a few too many unfinished pieces, so I’d rather not post the update until it’s fully ready.
Thank you for understanding! 
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Do you know what point you’re gonna finish book one at? Cause this is already larger than most IFs I’ve read but it still feels like we’re only at the beginning of the story (hence the book 1, I’m assuming)
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That’s a…great question . Honestly, I think I might have been a little too ambitious for my first IF/writing project (but I’m no quitter), plus the branching paths caused the word count to increase pretty quickly. However, Book 1 has to cover a lot of ground (arguably the most in the whole planned trilogy) since it needs to establish the world, the main conflicts of the plot, bring the ROs’ storylines full circle (…mostly), and resolve many of the questions raised back in Chapter 1. Right now, I’d say we’re about a quarter of the way through, as I’m planning for Book 1 to be around 12 chapters in total.
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That’s crazy work man. I hope to see it done because I love this WIP, excited to see where it goes next.
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Thank you, I’ll fix it with the next update.
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Finally finished the update, it was great! Excited for more!
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Just managed to finish reading this. Great story! Need more Murder waifu Elaine tho!
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